| "What is Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: January 16, 2002 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I can't get enough of Panny's sweetness. Her graphic account of gerbils mating and Veggie's reaction was too much-lol. Now that the cheating bastard is outta the way maybe B/V can do a little "mating" of their own (hehe). |
Reviewed By: SSJ-4 Vegeta On: January 10, 2002 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this was a great story I liked how you made it so it showed Vegeta didint have a compltley black heart. Great how he would do any thing for Pan |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 09, 2002 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best ones I have read in a while! Please add more |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 09, 2002 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawwwww, I just love the interaction between Veggie and Panny. It's hard to picture the prince being loving and sweet. Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 03, 2002 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, this is getting so exciting! I can't wait to read what happens next! Peace. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
awww vegeta is so mean to bulma! haha its very realistic though! i like it! hey, there seems to be a prob with our quotation marks.. i had to use this ~ as a substitute :p hopefully by your next chapter everything will be formatted properly again :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 30, 2001 04:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The party chapter was great. Panny is adorable and Mrs. Briefs can be surprising with her take on things going on around her. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Happy New Year |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: December 28, 2001 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the "The Party" chapter the most. Keep up the good work. I would love to see a few more chapters concerning this epic, it really draws the reader's mind into the story. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2001 03:36 CST
Comment/Review:
awww gosh... the thought of seeing Veggie baby sitting amidst a pile of ribbons and wrappings makes my heart melt! What's next! I'm hoping it'll come soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 25, 2001 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veggie wrapping presents? Heck, I would pay to see that! Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens at the party, and his reaction when Bulma gives him a present. Later |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 17, 2001 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, I love the way that Panny and Veggie relate to each other. I hope that this isn't the end, because this story has so much potential. No, you did not put me to sleep. I think it is necessary for the author to explain why Veggie is such an SOB at times. Please write more. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 10, 2001 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is original and very promising. Please hurry up with chapter 6. |
Reviewed By: Flecia On: November 26, 2001 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, please write more soon. Loving it!!! |
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