| "What is Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: July 15, 2002 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! Looks like Veggie's in the hot seat now. I for one would also like to know what the hell is going on. For some reason that I can't explain I don't trust her "parents". |
Reviewed By: Angelee On: June 30, 2002 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hii!! It's me from fanfiction.net. I've already read this but I wanted to leave you a review on here too!! Don't feel like messing with HTML right now so biebie! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 23, 2002 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No f*cking way!! I thought her parents were dead?! You're right, this does not look good. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 23, 2002 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but cute. Can't wait to see how you bring these two together considering that they've grown up together. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Jen Briefs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VEGGIE-TRUNKS! You probably gussing, who the hell is this? Of course, it's me... JEN! Yea, just came to give you yet another Good... great... amazing review... =) Like the good ol' me always does... anyway, I read the last 2 chapters, OMG! I can't wait to read the next 1! I thought Pan's parents were dead!... okay, actually I forgot that Pan was raised by Vegeta, see FF.net has been down, WAY TO LONG.. since you CURSED IT! ANyway, GREAT suspence, I love how you write! Note: "style of writing" 10 out of 10! HAHAHA! SSsssssssee you later! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 12:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is such a good story! Why must you stop? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 28, 2002 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was some close call. Panny could've been flattened into a pancake. Her "so-what" attitude, upon hearing about Bulma's pregnancy, was funny. Finally Trunks is born and Panny wants to marry him when she grows up? That's a switch. For once it'll be Pan whose the older one. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oops!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: March 21, 2002 14:41 CST
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Please update ASAP!!!!!! Dont leave it at a clif hangar update it more!!!!!!!!!!!!often!!! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i luv it! can't wiat for the next chapter. I jsut hope that veggie doesn't get too mad... I really don't like it when people make him seriously pissed off. but i do like it when he's like shocked at first but sorta happy, you know? |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but funny as hell! I love it please continue soon |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Vegeta kicks some weakling ASS! Hey that's a good chapter name for another story. Starts thinking of another story. But still, have Yamcha go to far and Vegeta kick his ass! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 02, 2002 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG could Pan be Veggie's daughter? If she is how will Bulma react? I hope Bulma's medicine works b/c I hate seeing a child suffer. Yamcha's needs to get his assed kicked so that he can stay away from Bulma. How dense can he be anyway-she doesn't want him and never will. Good chap. Update when you can. Peace |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2002 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where will the story go without Pan? She cannot die! Please. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Pannie!! You've got to save her! Pan CANNOT die!! By the way, good-lookin' out on Bulma kicking that bastard Yamcha to the curb!! Usually I just feel tepid towards Yammie, but when you start wishing children to die, well then, you deserve what you get.
*Hotohori4life mimics fan at a boxing match*
"Hit him with a left Veggie-Chan! Now a Right!!"
Gotta update!! |
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