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Reviewed By: .yusuke. On: August 27, 2005 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey good fic but next time user a spell checker ok??? lol dont worry or get mad I always have to use them too because of the various spilling mistakes that i make ^_^' well continue whriting
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Title: N.L.
Reviewed By: unamed On: August 26, 2005 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this has the potential to be a really good story, but you have to fix the spelling mistakes. It makes it really hard to read. But the overall plot and idea is a good one. Work on the presentation of it and you'll have a really good story. Good job, keep working on it.
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Title: N.L.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 05, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You have some spelling mistakes.A LOT OF THEM! Just you might want to proof read a little thats all ok?
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: May 03, 2005 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely and good fic. Please it can't be ending like this, you have more to write, I know it. Congratulations.
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