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| "My Resistance Is Waning" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG, this was so good! I read it over about three times to make sure that I understood it right, and you made me try to think, which gave me a headache, but after taking a tylonal and reading it again, I luv it. ^^
| Title: Second review ^_^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (To Lazy to login) On: May 01, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOT I love this one-shot, you're really good at writing fanfic's gurl! You keep it not to flat and not to much detail, just enough haha. I love fic's which are sad or angsty and have a table spoon of romance in it *thinks* wait make the table spoon a big jar! I loved the part where Kagome though: "You kissed Kikyo, you embraced her like there was no tomorrow. There is no future for me", I don't know what it is but there's something about that sentence I really think is beautiful. I hope you write many more one-shots and of course some lemon ones 'cause your other one-shot: " Heat can scar", was really good! If I may request: could you write a Sango/Miroku one-shot please *looks at you with big watery eyes and a holds a box of pocky in her hand* pretty please with a cherry on top?! Owh well I think I'm starting to scare you with my review now :P so I'll quit this one. Please don't mind my grammar I don't have my spell check on, so sorry English isn't my mother tongue. Big K!$$ and Lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
| Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Awesome! So kawaii! I think that is the ending that all true fans wish for - a cute lil Inu+Kag scene with so much fluff you won't eat sugar for a week!!! Write more soon!
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