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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great start but PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great start but PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!! PLEASE HURRY UP!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great start but PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great start but PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!!
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Reviewed By: foad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Aoi asking the girls to be concubines was a shocking but enjoyable treat. I expected something like that for Miyabi, but not the other girls. Also, in Necessary Evil, the situation with Tina left me thinking that she was already pregnant. Nice to know that non of the women are pregnant yet. I have this vision that all of them will find out that they're pg at the same time (my imagination). Keep up the good work. I am eagerly awaiting for the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fic to be very enjoyable and very good. Though I was confused at first when he jumped ahead it time but I usually caught on quickly. Also I wish there was some more info. about what happend "three months ago" with Aoi's guardian that is repeatedly refered to, but I hope that is being save for future chapters, hopefully. Again overall a very well writen fanfic.
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