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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: Terdwilicker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. The characters were themselves, and their reactions to Kaoru were within reason. As a lemon it is definitive.
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Reviewed By: Gadoury8477 On: August 10, 2006 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome I read both stories. Too bad you don't want to continue.
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Title: As always
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellently done. to be honest, I'd give you a higher rating if I could.
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Title: Preggers delight!
Reviewed By: denisud On: July 11, 2006 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kinda wished I knew which of the others was with child, and You could have written maybe the year they all had to go through their pregnancies w/o having to go into the future and specific kids! But so far may man, you stories Kick ass! I stayed up all night reading them!` dennisud
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Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 11:57 CDT
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Finally got a chance to catch up with this. Aoi's time at Kaoru's mother's grave was especially touching. What's really on Tina's mind? On to the next chapter... W.
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Reviewed By: flake On: March 08, 2006 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad I did not read the entire thing word for word. 100 pages of long winded and weak, repetitive screw job's does not make a good story. weak.
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Reviewed By: foad [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you stated you wanted to end the fic with the girls being pregnant, but I think it would interesting to see what thier life was like to about one month after the last baby was born.
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Reviewed By: clauswitz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 14:51 CDT
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after having read this necessary evil and those who hunt eva i'm kinda curious as to why you never have any of the females with the male lead have anal sex? if it wasnt brought up at all it would be differant but since it is brought up several times and a fair number of the females indicate they wouldnt mind the reader is kinda left hanging...
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, great cliff hanger at the end of the 2nd chapter. I only wish that you put which girls where with chlid, but great story anyway.
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Reviewed By: deckman1063 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very pleasant read! Nice continuation of your previous stuff, less angst (I tend to gravitate towards waffy stuff, anyway). Good grammar, only minor errors here and there, mostly missing words. I am looking forward to a next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:28 CDT
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No sex in the story? C'mon. Where is the excitement? Please write lots of sex in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:28 CDT
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No sex in the story? C'mon. Where is the excitement? Please write lots of sex in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:27 CDT
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PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!! What are you waiting for?
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:27 CDT
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PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!! What are you waiting for?
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 01:27 CDT
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PL:EASE LET KAORU FUCK CHIKA!!!!!! I WANT CHIKA HAVE SEX WITH KAORU!!!! What are you waiting for?
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