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| "Pirates! The Wrath of the Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Yugi Lover
Reviewed By: Celeste Bellow On: July 20, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was plesent, remarkable, and whats up with fahther?! Please make Yami & Yugi lovers. I Know there bothers, but put a twist that they found out there not bothers and that have sex to get back at supose to be dad for not telling them. Make a new chapther soon.^_^ ^_^ ^_^!!!
| Reviewed By: VamPyro On: May 02, 2005 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I love pirate stories! Please continue!
| Reviewed By: Pysche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you all tens because you're perfect, wifey. You know I've got you on author alert here too, now? You're the only one, too, lol. But yeah! I'm glad you decided to post this here, and that you're going to keep writing it. This story is so cute; I love Atemu in it, the way he's so unsure and so attached to Seto, and Seto, bless his heart, couldn't resist if he wanted to. Hey you know I can make this review in color? I LOVE YOU REKALL!! hmm... not sure that worked. But oh well! Write more, before Dragon sics CA on you!!
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