| "Delirium: Sixth" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Eccaia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you switched to talking about Chris, the entire time I'm reading this going, "oh god...0h god...He's gonan walk right in on them be scarred for life! He's gonna need therpy for years!" xD Very nice story. I liked it a lot!
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Reviewed By: GeneWeiss [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy! GeneWeiss definitely needs a cold drink now! Vert cold drink! Maybe, a shower too! Geez, this is one of the hottest & probably the most erotic lemon fic GeneWeiss has ever read. Geezz... okay, GeneWeiss is heading for the bathroom now.
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 23:11 CDT
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Ooh, I like. I just got back into PSOH because I watched the anime. This is hot. Very much so. I'm so glad to find new PSOH ficcage. Go you!
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Reviewed By: raison d'etat On: May 17, 2005 16:43 CDT
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Super-hot smut, especially when taken in context with the rest of the fic. Definitely worth the long wait, but I'm still eager for the next part! Thanks for this.
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 07:49 CDT
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It doesn't suck! It's awesome! The way you write things is so poetic (not to mention erotic) and it really draws you in. I just started reading the rest of it on ff.net, and it is very interesting. It's also very orriginal for a romance fic. I love it. ^_^ (PS It would be coold if you put the whole thing on MM.org, but that's your choice.)
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Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoforgottologin On: May 07, 2005 19:20 CDT
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(As usual, I've forgotten to log in) Excellent chapter! Just for ONCE, I'd like to see D on top, but... this was really nice. You described D's emotions well. And of course, it was H-O-T.
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 00:46 CDT
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wow. that has got to be the HOTTEST lemon i have ever read. awesome job.
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