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"Evangelions and Saiyajins" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2004 23:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was good. I like the way you've go things going so far. The only thing that made it less enjoyable was the spelling errors. You REALLY need to work on your spelling and grammar. Once you fix that it will be great. Keep up the good work. Ja-ne. - Chaos Damn It
 Reviewed By: Optimus Magnus  On: July 11, 2003 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This seems good, although I must point out that if Shinji is a trained Saiyen, then an N2 Mine is a like a fly swat strike to him.

Other than that, a fun story

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