| "Search for my Soul Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I probably might of liked this story but when I read the summery saying that Naruto pretty much doesn` want her because she was raped and also how it sounds that your making that asshole Sasuke to be her hero or well pair her up with him just ruin it for me mainly where you made it sound like Naruto to be the asshole sorry I like Naruto and I really really reallly HATE Sasuke becase almost everybody thinks and makes Sasuke out to be a GOD oh well
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Title: dark
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
make more.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lotus Kajin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it in all honesty. I see Hinata was being afraid of people due to how she grew up. Women in wealthy families in Japan are submissive to say the least. Hinata might be strong but seems to lack self confidence and without Naruto around she really has no reason to fight. Plus, if your body is worn out from training I cannot see anyone being able to fight against such. Call it panic as well and you are too frantic to get away. I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue with it! Don't let one person's negative opinion stop you. ^_^
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Title: Search for my Soul Mate
Reviewed By: Mr. MiSTer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The thing that killed this for me was a giant, glaring plothole. This is freaking HINATA. She's a konoha gennin. She stood up to Neji and lived. 3 drunk nobodies who aren't even ninja would be in dreamland before they even managed to lay a FINGER on her. All in all, I like your writing style, and I like your descriptions and emotional content. You just need to put a little more thought into characterization and keep things plausable. If I where you, I'd change it so it was a powerful foreign ninja or missing-nin who does it. Maybe Kabuto? or one of the other sound ninja from the chunin exam?
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