| "On Our Knees, Begging -- Please!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: I thank you.
Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the most moving peices i have ever read in my life. IT brought tears to my eyes. The emotion in it was almost unfathomable. I thank you for the gift of being able to read it.
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Reviewed By: Enchanted Faery [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My my my, you had me crying on some parts of this story! In fact I think that this is my favorite one shot now, great job and I hope to see more of your stuff on MM.org
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Title: On Our Knees, Begging
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Krazykait On: May 05, 2005 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its not confusing, the way its writen gives you the feelings, the emotions that are being felt. Its actually an acknowledged way of writing, stream of conscious I believe.
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