| "The Good, The Bad and The Hunger for Supremacy." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 11:38 CDT
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Hah! Chapter three is the funniest thing ever! You know, I really thought Goku would win even with such a low score! I mean, who couldn't see Kirby scoring a zero? Anywho, I hope you update very soon because I've been waiting for over 2 months now for them to fight!
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Reviewed By: some guy s On: July 25, 2005 17:00 CDT
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hey, good story, i like the origaniality of it. As for who should win the fight...well, I have always been a Kirby fan, so i'd have ta say Kirby. He's just so cool!
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 19:04 CDT
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By the way, are you reading my other fics too?
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:17 CDT
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Um... yeah. Can you have the two of them fight already?
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: shadowking1228 On: June 29, 2005 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is pretty good and i could see it goin places. Try to keep updating when you can, I wanna see how it ends.
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Title: Hipocrit
Reviewed By: Edward_Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now whose not finishing their Fan Fic????
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Reviewed By: Neil Dunsmore (Mediaminor Member) On: June 10, 2005 22:53 CDT
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NLD2000, here! This is pretty good, though it seems odd that Dedede would treat people his "guests" with so much respect.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Edward_Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow a dbz and kirby fanfic.....wow. Well it's definitly original. Good job.....I guess. I did like the four way fushion though...I mean come on we were all hoping for it durring the show right?
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