| "Was It Faith?" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yurika On: July 13, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hate to say this but your fanfict need a little more detail on lot of things, I know you might not want to explain too much and make the story bore but sometimes add a little explanation will make it better, like the webbing and what happen to Yamcha.
I love the part at the mall, it was great! Please continue to write, maybe you might want to write something longer and add a little twist in between. Hehe, those are sad but they are good but that is your choice.
Anyway, please continue to write! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 25, 2002 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, Trunks is born and now they can all live happily ever after (yeah, right). I enjoyed your fic and all it's funny moments. Peace |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! I luv it! *smile* can't wait for the next chapter. hehe |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 22, 2002 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good. Write more. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 03, 2002 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Morning sickness, messed up hormones, bizarre food cravings. Bulma will be REALLY THRILLED to find out that she's pregnant. LOL-she didn't even remember losing her virginity or having any fun while doing it!! Funny chap. Peace |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: March 02, 2002 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! it was so funny the last chapter!! i can't wait till bulma finds out!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2002 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
could I laugh any harder? not without needing medical attention *heh* so now I'm stuck with the rest of your fans waiting painfully for the next chapter.. you know I hate this site, I really really do ;) |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: February 18, 2002 02:24 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! finalmente!!! :) that took awhile, but it was worth it! what a cute chap! keep it up! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you finally put up more,but...but nothing happened. :( all they did was swim and eat marshmellows. im not complaning im just saying...
happy put up more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 17, 2002 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Great chap. I know how Bulma feels b/c I have a fear of heights myself. The interaction between B/V is priceless. Good job. |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 07, 2002 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe I wonder what's gonna happen on the island (wink wink)I can't wait for further ubdates so please continue! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 29, 2002 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO VEGGIE GO!!! ok now youve got all your readers atention continue wrighting. but i want to know r you going to go hentai? ok i gota go bai bai |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: January 28, 2002 02:47 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohhh let's get it oooon... hehehehe :) wow! they're finally alone after all that time! sigh * why'd you stop!?!?!! crazy! put more up! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 28, 2002 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. They're finally going to be ALONE and there's nothing Yamcha can do about it (hehe). Can't wait for the next chap. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 07:35 CST
Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOLOLOL naughty is right. bad vegeta bad vegeta...,but yamcha diserved it hes tarible and if ppl like him i dont see how. GO VEGGIE TRUNKS!! YOUR FICS RULE |
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