| "Was It Faith?" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 13, 2002 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed reading this. I espeacially loved the last chapter "Why does Kami hate me so?". Incase you didn't have this in mind might I suggest to have things spice up (aka a lemon or too) just to make things interesting. Can't wait until the next chapter(s). Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2002 05:01 CST
Comment/Review:
AGGHHHH vegeta! heeheehee what a meanie :) i hope something happens QUICK! i won't be able to live, i'm going through veggie withdrawal :) everyone around me is elf crazy! i loved this chap.! please hurry with the next one! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 11, 2002 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what Yamcha's pathetic plan is to get even with Veggie. Peace |
Reviewed By: pimpdaddyz On: January 07, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good/ plz keep up the good work it's getting really interesting! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2002 20:12 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO why did you stop?!?! WHY WHY WHY?!! i love the fact that he went to surprise her! aghh i can't get enough of vegeta :) please update it asap, k? |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: January 03, 2002 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite b/v fanfics!! keep writing i plan to see a new chapter before my breack ends!! please! good job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 03, 2002 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Let me guess-Bulma will either go balistic and hug him and kiss and fall on top of him (hehe), or she'll be so shocked that she'll faint and fall into his arms (aaahhh). Then again she's got such a temper she's liable to tell him off for taking 10 years to return. Anyway, please update asap. Peace |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2001 18:37 CST
Comment/Review:
are u gonna write when he comes back to earth? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 29, 2001 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad and sweet, that I've got tears in my eyes. Good job Majin. I am curious about the next chapter though, so please update when you can. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 25, 2001 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like you couldn't stay away from your computer today. Well I'm glad cause it gave me something to read. Anyway, your story is developing quite nicely. I specially like the rivalry between Veggie and Yamcha, and I cant wait to read what happens next. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 20, 2001 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I've enjoyed all the chapters. It kind of gives you an idea of what Veggie would be like as a kid. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 03:33 CST
Comment/Review:
cute!!! :) please finish it up! its getting interesting! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 16:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
So sweet-the ending at least. They have pottie mouths. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2001 17:07 CST
Comment/Review:
hahaha i love it already and thats saying something, i usually have to read the first chapters to really get into a story, keep writing, i want to read more.
:P |
Reviewed By: Lumina On: December 01, 2001 05:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey...read ur fanfic. Duuh, or else i wouldn't be doing this. Well anyway i think it's pretty good and it's a shame there's not a third chapter yet. Pretty original really....well L@r |
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