"The Burning Time" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Amazing Reviewed By: theultimatedarkness On: April 01, 2009 19:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutely loved your story. I kind of wish you had a more encompassing ending but other then that it was probably the best fanfic I've ever read. Your ideas were original and interesting. I was completely hooked once I started reading and I wish they actually use your story as a second season of Witch Hunter Robin.
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Title: Thaaaankyou! Reviewed By: End Sinister [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 08:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It is so rare that I see such in depth, well researched work as you've created. Thankyou so much for making such an enjoyable fanfiction (and with two of my favorite characters I might add) Please continue! This is simply marvelous work. Don't think for a moment that it goes unappreciated!
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Title: *bows* Reviewed By: Isis_de_Leon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 12:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Its rare that while I read I almost "hear and see" the story vs just reading. Only one other author has ever managed to do this. Your the 2nd author whos managed this. Please continue to write Witch Hunter Robin ficts and this current story. Im so addicted to it. :D
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Title: The Burning Time Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: To: Misora Reviewed By: Amie On: July 20, 2005 17:12 CDT Comment/Review: I hope that my review in no way inhibited your desire to work on this fic! It's very good...I'm shocked that you've had so few reviews. I've been checking back every so often because I would love to see where this story is headed. You're a very talented writer, and it would be a shame not to continue this work. I understand that updates of writing of this caliber may take a little longer, but I will keep popping by to see if you've added chapters. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Amie On: June 05, 2005 22:48 CDT Comment/Review: Sorry about the dupe! &*$%# spam filter!!
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Title: Compelling Reviewed By: Amie On: June 05, 2005 22:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Your fic is extremely well crafted! The chapters are clean and defined, and your story is interesting. Like the show, very atmospheric. However, also like the show, you're spending a lot of time on mood and exhibition and, sorry to be so frank, it's dragging the story down a little. I hope that Chapter 6 will include some action elements. Please don't misunderstand, I love how perfectly you are portraying Amon and Robin! Their internal monologues and external dialogues are complex and true to their characters. Your use of Japanese and Italian is appropriate and adds zest and versimilitude to their conversations. The glossary at the end is much appreciated. You're obviously putting a lot of effort into this fic, with marvelous results. Please update soon! Merci beaucoup!
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Title: Compelling Reviewed By: A,mie On: June 05, 2005 22:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Your fic is extremely well crafted! The chapters are clean and defined, and your story is interesting. Like the show, very atmospheric. However, also like the show, you're spending a lot of time on mood and exhibition and, sorry to be so frank, it's dragging the story down a little. I hope that Chapter 6 will include some action elements. Please don't misunderstand, I love how perfectly you are portraying Amon and Robin! Their internal monologues and external dialogues are complex and true to their characters. Your use of Japanese and Italian is appropriate and adds zest and versimilitude to their conversations. The glossary at the end is much appreciated. You're obviously putting a lot of effort into this fic, with marvelous results. Please update soon! Merci beaucoup!
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