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Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, very emotional and tight. One word... MORE!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Wednesday On: May 25, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEWL!!! you updated REALLY fast!!! ditto to my last review. i'm sorry, but i'm really tired and haven't slept since monday... i'd write more praise for your outstanding writing, but i'm sleepy and going to bed. g'night.....
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Reviewed By: Mr. Wednesday [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi again!! i am SOOOO happy that you brought Miroku back!!! i would also like to address the fact that i gave you all tens. most would just give tens to be nice, but i really mean it. this is the first fic i have ever given that rating. Also, many fics that have sesshomaru paired with someone have him immediately accept the fact that he is comming to like the person (very OOC!). your fic has Sesshomaru much more in charicter. that is normally very hard to do, but you do it exceptionally well. yet again, i must say that i LOVE the sess/miroku pairing. SEE YA NEXT CHAPTER!! please uptade soon!!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 11:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good, nice choice of pairings, never really thought that those two would do anything but try to kill each other, but good none the less
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Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic!! sess/miro is quite an original pairing... they work very well together. but OMG!!! you KILLED miroku!!! how could you??? i'm very interested in what you will do with the story now. what will happen to Sesshomaru? will Miroku be revived somehow? if not, will Sesshy be paired with someone else? NEway... please post some new chapters soon!! P.S. if you want a beta reader, my e-mail is: kagomes_servant@yahoo.com SEE YOU NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: out92 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I would've wrote earlier when you first started posting, BUT I had to remember my ID for this site....figures I would loose the ID for the BEST fan fics! I love this story, great wording, good grammar, great details! More more more more more!
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Title: *giggles*
Reviewed By: Ghothika94 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute how you made Sesshoumaru like chocolate..please update
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