| "Promises of Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 05:25 CDT
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"thought of when she had watched Sesshoumaru battle, and it was true that he was a very fierce youkai, but he never really fought Inuyasha with that same ferocity that she had seen him fight others, now that she thought about it." Sesshoumaru tried to kill InuYasha at least twice - the battle for Tetsaiga and the Toukijin arc. As you stated, Sess has to be OOC to make the story work. InuYasha is also OOC, especially if you are going by the manga. I'd categorize the story as 'other' or 'divergence' rather than 'continuation'.
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far- I just hope you don't make us wait as long for the next chapter as you did for this one! LOL Just teasing but please do keep 'em coming! I am really enjoying your skill!!!
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Reviewed By: kirara_purr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 16:51 CST
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oohhh! thank you for naming me in the end of your fic, I an honored!! ^-^ Despite that lemon-type-thing in chapter six, the rest is really great! I harass my sister with tellings of your great fic. I always crack up at the \'20 Questons\' thing and Jaken choking on pocky is hilarious! Pwease update soon!
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Reviewed By: kirara_purr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 03:52 CST
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Your fic is great except for that...werid...part. um, no offense, but i kinda skipped that part which i sortof file as perverted. the rest is great. sesshy & kagome aren't gonna fall in love n stuff, though, right? i mean, shes got inu already, even if he IS off with his undead ex-gf.
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Reviewed By: kirara_purr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 03:49 CST
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whoa, good story. please write some more!
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Title: Promises Of Forever
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Darkest_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHH I love it...*snickers at the alternitive ending of that chapter* oh that is TO Funny *shudders* ewwwww THATS The TOUD Thing though....ewwwwww...ANYWHAY I hope to see another chapter soon I wanne know how Fluffy-Sama handle's all that im SURE is gonne come his way...I mean he is dealing with the ONE the ONLY KAGOME ...*gigles* Well Hope to be reading more soon
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Title: Promises Of Forever
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Promises of Forever
Reviewed By: Lost Star [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story it was original and held my attention. I can't wait till you update it.
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Title: Promises Of Forever
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Promises Of Forever
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 18:49 CDT
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I must say I can't wait to see more chapters from you... lots more i hope. It is a very entertaining fic and I like it so far, please don't make us wait too long for more from you.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: May 10, 2005 20:26 CDT
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i second lovelorn's comment. wow. update soon!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 10, 2005 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow kepe up the good work and udpate again soon please?
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