| "I Spy" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 01:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I have something nice to say! It was great! I loved it, it seems more in character than most I've read!
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Reviewed By: Zackzman On: June 09, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can tell u put a whole lot of effort into that, and it was worth it
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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon (not signed on) On: June 09, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was soo sweet :-D I completely loved this story lol and I loved purple lace too, I hope to see more of your work!! ~Silver moon dragon
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Reviewed By: missbritt321 On: May 14, 2005 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it it was really good im glade you wrote it thaqnks;)
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Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: DaisyLee1239 On: May 08, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story made me happy! yay! Please write anoder one! Tee hee hee!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 08, 2005 00:14 CDT
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I liked your story. You have good grammar skills and your spelling was excellent. My only complaint is that it was hard to read because of the way all the paragraphs ran together. In order to make it easier for readers, try putting a line between each paragraph. Many people will not take the time to read a story if it is not formatted for easy reading. Good luck and thank you for sharing your story with us.
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