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| "Cursed Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Hey! Another great chapter!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah long as anything, it took me an hour to read it (if you calculate the time my friends interrupted and my dinner that I eat while reading). It was great, it really has a lot of potentiol, the plot is uncovering slowly but surely, but Jeni and her powers, i dont quite get that yet, I wonder what she has promised, or did I just forget that?? *looks confused*, i will have to read your chapter again, but it was a really nice free time difference, especially if you have a job an cant do much of the stuff anymore...UPDATE SOON!
| Title: Update
Reviewed By: the_eternity_code [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Keep the work up. It's evenly paced and you don't rush the story along. It was altogether interesting, and an enjoying story to read.
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is kind of great! PLEASE UPDATE!
| Title: That was cool ^-^!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! Great chapters you wrote in maybe one day (I dont know if you did) and the story line is hding something from a reader, probably the plot that is forming, but I do like the style you write, it is easy to read and very long, I hope you continue your work like that I am already interested in the next chapters, UPDATE please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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