| "Moonbeams and Night Kisses" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: im going to keep going
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still going.......see i figured it out all u want is 20 reviews right??? well i care about this fic sooooooo much that im going to reach that 20 allllllll by myself
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Title: still trying to reach the top
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see still a good durl page is reviewing she is a good gurl please reward the good gurl by updating thankies
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see ?!?!? im a good girl i am reviwing(spelling) its not exactally 20 reviews but im trying to make it there please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: space-chick On: July 30, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darn you the suspence is KILLING me and i have to WAIT!! but besides that the story was great!
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Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 On: June 03, 2005 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT!!! I absolutely LOVE this!! I hope you keep it up!! *puppy dog face*
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Title: FFARG Review (2)
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
(continued) It can be guessed that the group was on yet another Shard hunt, but a little clarification would be nice. Also, the group usually stops their travels rather early, before the sun goes down at least. This is where some more clarification would help. Did they get detained fighting a particularly tough demon? Another thing, if Kouga kidnapped Kagome again, InuYasha would have definately given chase, followed by all the others. He wouldn't just leave her to fend for herself when he knows how Kouga is. Ayame... I'm not even going to get into this one. A beta would help you greatly, they could help to clear some of the confusion up. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me. Overall, I think the idea behind the story is a great one, it could just use some polishing up. Again, thanks for submitting this to the FFARG!!
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 23:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
First let me say thank you for submitting this to the FFARG!! Now to the story... I had major problems with the Kagome/InuYasha interaction when he was "asleep". He never sleeps that soundly, he's always on guard against anything and everything. He spent his whole childhood, and most of his adult life, running, and fighting for his life. There are too many demons and humans out there that want him dead just because of his heritage, so he has a reason to be on guard. The moment Kagome did anything he would have known about it, sure you could say that he allowed it to happen, and faked being asleep, I would buy that. Not to mention the fact that he would have known she was close just by her scent alone. Then there is Kouga... Kagome has never allowed him to just cart her off, excluding the first time she met him when he kidnapped her. However, after that initial kidnapping, he always seems to arrive in a whirlwind and then leave again just as suddenly. I don't know how much of the series you've seen, but in the later episodes (I'm talking during the Seven Man Group) Kouga and InuYasha come to a slight unspoken agreement. Sure they still fight, and sure Kouga is still hard headed when it comes to Kagome, but deep down he knows that Kagome is InuYasha's woman and has been for quite some time. Another thing that needs to be cleared up is why the group is in the middle of the forest to begin with. (will continue)
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 16:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah, you're chapters are really short. even though they're good, and interesting, theres really just not enough to make a good review with... but hey, im reviewing anyway just to get you closer to twenty, because i want to read more.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: May 08, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool
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Reviewed By: friend On: May 06, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want to read more so hurry! i realy like it
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Reviewed By: dreamgirl16 On: May 06, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it keep going i want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! That's sooo cute! ...what number is this? UPDATE! *hands you cookie* please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Brittany B. On: May 05, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to read more you have to keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Me On: May 05, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it, you have to keep writing!
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Reviewed By: A fan of yours On: May 05, 2005 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and I hope that you will write more. I hope that you will go into really deep detail because the start was really cool. You are really good.
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