| "Moonbeams and Night Kisses" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, so i'm behind on the times, apparently. i saw that you updated this one lately, so i figured i'd start here. i love that inu was awake for the whole 'molestation'. it's hysterical that he called it that to Kouga. even better that Kouga showed up. of all the luck...LOL. good story, well written. ^__^ it's been forever, or near to it; how are you?
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Title: bwhahahahah
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bwahhahaahhaah, now you have NO choice you HAVE toupdate cause you promised that if you get at least 20 reviews then you would update so update already do not lie to your public...update!!! thankies bwbwhahahahaha ahem ¨robot voice ¨i mean please update u did promise all your faithful fans that you would if you had 20 reviews and you do not want to dissappoint them now do you! ha ha ha you ave no choice!!!!!¨normal voice¨i love you sooooo update soon thanies soooo much
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Title: swim swim swim
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:42 CDT
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swimming thats a really good sport that i am in its fun and almost all of my friends are in it. k enough about swimming lets just talk....one hentai gurl to the next.....finnish your awesome bloody storie(not brittish just using the accent) update soon thankies!!!!
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Title: just keep writting
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:40 CDT
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hey do yoU know that song tht dorthy sings on finding nemo? well im going to sing it now.....¨just keep swimming just keep swimming .what do we do we swim...swim..lala lala.oolalalalal la¨thank you and good night by the way UPDATE OR I WILL SING AGAIN and i will also be you faithful servent!!
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Title: servent
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:37 CDT
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come on im YOUR servent what dont you get about that page is your servent and as long as she gets her rewards by reading any and all of your fan fics she will do what you say so ...go with it flow eith it and for the love of god UPDATE!!!!1
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Title: COME ON
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:35 CDT
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come on no dont be stubborn you have very faithful servents here and you have to learn how to use them like me for example i will roll over and beg of you to update this storie!!!1
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Title: im going to keep going
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still going.......see i figured it out all u want is 20 reviews right??? well i care about this fic sooooooo much that im going to reach that 20 allllllll by myself
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Title: still trying to reach the top
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see still a good durl page is reviewing she is a good gurl please reward the good gurl by updating thankies
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
see ?!?!? im a good girl i am reviwing(spelling) its not exactally 20 reviews but im trying to make it there please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: space-chick On: July 30, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darn you the suspence is KILLING me and i have to WAIT!! but besides that the story was great!
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Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 On: June 03, 2005 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT!!! I absolutely LOVE this!! I hope you keep it up!! *puppy dog face*
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Title: FFARG Review (2)
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 23:44 CDT
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(continued) It can be guessed that the group was on yet another Shard hunt, but a little clarification would be nice. Also, the group usually stops their travels rather early, before the sun goes down at least. This is where some more clarification would help. Did they get detained fighting a particularly tough demon? Another thing, if Kouga kidnapped Kagome again, InuYasha would have definately given chase, followed by all the others. He wouldn't just leave her to fend for herself when he knows how Kouga is. Ayame... I'm not even going to get into this one. A beta would help you greatly, they could help to clear some of the confusion up. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me. Overall, I think the idea behind the story is a great one, it could just use some polishing up. Again, thanks for submitting this to the FFARG!!
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 23:34 CDT
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First let me say thank you for submitting this to the FFARG!! Now to the story... I had major problems with the Kagome/InuYasha interaction when he was "asleep". He never sleeps that soundly, he's always on guard against anything and everything. He spent his whole childhood, and most of his adult life, running, and fighting for his life. There are too many demons and humans out there that want him dead just because of his heritage, so he has a reason to be on guard. The moment Kagome did anything he would have known about it, sure you could say that he allowed it to happen, and faked being asleep, I would buy that. Not to mention the fact that he would have known she was close just by her scent alone. Then there is Kouga... Kagome has never allowed him to just cart her off, excluding the first time she met him when he kidnapped her. However, after that initial kidnapping, he always seems to arrive in a whirlwind and then leave again just as suddenly. I don't know how much of the series you've seen, but in the later episodes (I'm talking during the Seven Man Group) Kouga and InuYasha come to a slight unspoken agreement. Sure they still fight, and sure Kouga is still hard headed when it comes to Kagome, but deep down he knows that Kagome is InuYasha's woman and has been for quite some time. Another thing that needs to be cleared up is why the group is in the middle of the forest to begin with. (will continue)
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 16:09 CDT
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yeah, you're chapters are really short. even though they're good, and interesting, theres really just not enough to make a good review with... but hey, im reviewing anyway just to get you closer to twenty, because i want to read more.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: May 08, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool
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