| "Entwined forever" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Clarissa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You copied Titanic...honestly...can't you think up something original? All you basically changed are the characters!!!
By the way, the rest of the story is excellent. Just the Titanic parts piss me off. |
Reviewed By: ~BaBySmurf~ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2001 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWWWW!! That was wAy sweet!!! Remember,in my eyes, a fic could NEVER be to mushy!! *sigh* I think I'm addicted to sappy romances. Anyways, thank-you for writing this fic, it was excellent! |
Reviewed By: Fanny chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2001 07:56 CST
Comment/Review:
~BaBySmurf~ Thanks for sticking for me >_ |
Reviewed By: Happyfan On: December 15, 2001 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! I like this fanfic,You where asking for inspiration wern't you? WWWEEELLL, maybe, if Jacob
did end up getting angrey who do you think he would take it out on? The dad? Touya? Sakura? or maybe even Syaoran? This could be used against other characters y'know, for example, what would happen if sakura's dad found out that she went to the other party with Syaoran??????? |
Reviewed By: ~BaBySmurf~ On: December 14, 2001 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
okay- listen Abby, you did a really sucky job reviewing, okay! that was just rude! You are so entitled to your opinion, but you could be a WHOLE lot nicer expressing it!! JEEZ! people's these days can be extremely rude- they have practically NO respect for others!!!! Also- is there a partcular reason you were reading this fic if you don't agree with the plot?!?
My God! Just stick to yourself Abby, or at least be a nicer person. >: p |
Reviewed By: Abby On: December 13, 2001 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story Sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Never ever put a anime couple in a titanic story. |
Reviewed By: HappyFace On: December 09, 2001 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER(s) SOON!!!!!!!!
Sorry, I just REALLY like this Fanfic :) ;)
P.S Can you make the ending differ than that of TITANIC? I mean, I, personally don't want to see Syaoran die like that.
*nods from background people* |
Reviewed By: SweetPeony On: December 09, 2001 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fanfic is interesting, the only thing is, that it is almost identical to Titanic. Please don't make Syaoran Die the same way that the other guy in Titanic did, and please try to make the story more interesting. Other than that, your story so far is pretty good. 1 more thing, PLEASE MAKE LONGER CHAPTERS!!! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: ~BaBySmurf~ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHH! I LoVe It!!! can we say TITANIC!! YaY! I love that movie!! anyways-- You wrote it very well-- but I think you should stray from the main storyline a little(meaning don't use the script word for word!)-- it would be more original and interestinger!! a question too- is it gonna be the exact same plot-- or different? either way will be awesome! But I like it a lot so far-- just PLEASE could you do longer Chapters?!?PLEASE?!?
LONG LIVE S+S!!!
keep writing!! I'm cheering for ya! WHOOOO! |
Reviewed By: Alanna On: November 28, 2001 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfiction. It was very romantic and there was not any part of the story that could possibly be misunderstood by any reader. I truly enjoyed the fanfiction and really hope to read the next chapter. I'm sure many including myself would like to know how Sakura's story ends. Alanna |
Reviewed By: death On: November 28, 2001 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad but u should just the type as AU instead of continuation. |
