| "Stolen" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: BBaller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really makes me want to read more. Please coninute! ^_^
|
Title: Stolen
Reviewed By: Galacia On: May 10, 2005 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this! Please give us more! Jynx: Gohan isn't really going to kill M.Trunks is he? Waah! M.Trunks too hot to kill!! D.Pearl: maybe if you are lucky he will just screw the heck out of him in a dominating way or something. Some BSDM or something like that would be great but yeah I 2nd the not killing the hot guys. Galacia: sadly I doubt this is a democracy guys. This is a monarchy and the writer can do what ever the heck they like. Although I would REALLY love to see what happens next in this story. This is kinda the first story I've read that shows what could happen if Radditz succeded in taking Gohan and raising him. Dark pearl: Geez if he ever learned about his otherself in Trunks time do you think he'd be disgusted and think his otherself weak or what? Anyways love the story so far PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue it!
|
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 09:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
woah. Beautifully written. Not as dark as I was expecting (had my muscles clenched in anticipation). I've read some dark in my day. Great start to a story too--high drama pulls you in. Damn fine job.
|
