| "Stealing My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryou is very forward when he's had a little wine very cute. I like this a lot. I was really laughing when he took off with the ring. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (who's laziness precedes her) On: May 13, 2005 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter! I look forward to seeing how this developes!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon,please
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (without the drive to log in) On: May 06, 2005 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Coolness! I look forward to seeing how this developes!
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Reviewed By: eve (forever broken) On: May 06, 2005 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a good chapter to begin with! so stop whining about it not being good! it's great!! and poor ryou! being beaten by those evil boys and they say he's a demon *pouts*! i realy wanna know who saved him.. and wow.. I've got a lot of questions! so PLEASE write a new chapter really really quick!! eve
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: May 05, 2005 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
...............This is the best first chapter I've seen in a long time. I can't wait for the rest of it! I love the evil boys and the piss pot bit. Poor Ryou and I want to know who saved him. How old is he anyways? I got a bunch of questions and I can't wait for chapter two to see if that answers any of them. Keep writing and update soon! Thank You. DK;)
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