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Title: Sequeal!!
Reviewed By: Ryu-Inu (not logged in) On: July 12, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu: I loved this!!! You should so make a fic where they meet up in the future. After Ryou get the ring. I could just be a one-shot but do something!!!!! PLease!!!! Ryu: I must agree. It would be great if you did. You are a very good author keep it up. Inu: I'm going to see if you have any other fics up. ~Byes~Byes!!
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Reviewed By: cas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *screamz* How...what...How could you do that!? Stopping right there! Right. There. Oh but it was a very good ending. Won't you make a sequel of how Bakura findz Ryou agin? If only they would put yaoi in Yu-Gi-Oh...A dream come true. Anyway, Nice! I luved the ending. So sad...But Kura won! Hahaha! Fuck you Yami! Muhahaha! Lol! Sorry. My moment. ^_^ I'm not a big fan of Yami/Yugi and I go for Romeo and Romeo. Although I would luv to see sum Tea bashing... Nice job! Can't wait for your next fic! *thumbz-up*
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Title: sequel?
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There will be a sequel right? there had better be it would be good like thsi story.
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Title: sequel
Reviewed By: ^__^ On: July 06, 2005 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to make a sequel of this fic. To bad Ryou left so soon...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 02:43 CDT
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I really liked the ending and hope you write a sequel soon. When and if you do a Joey and Seto lemon just pretend you are writing about Bakura and Ryou and go from there that might make it easier.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 22:07 CDT
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Good ending! (I can only hope when Bakura said he'd find his lover someday he meant it just to be with him...not hurt him like in the show... O_O Or something like that. GOOD JOB! I vote for the art thing again...and the Romeo and Romeo thing, perhaps calling it Jono and Kaibatette? LOL, okay, that wasn't good. Let's see... Well, the original title is Romeo and Juliette, right? Maybe play a bit more with the words or something like that. Just so long as the story doesn't end in trajedy, okay? Anything but that...I'm good with! Anyways, look forward to the next story!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (who's lazy and won't log in.) On: July 03, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A work of art or Romeo and Romeo, both sound pretty good to me. I hate angsty ending but you did set it in the past and twas to be expected unless you were changing the destinies of everyone. (My story Duel of Love will end saddly too, like, worse than yours it's sad.) Anways, that was good and I look forward to your next story!
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Title: #2
Reviewed By: ^__^ On: July 02, 2005 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo I'm all for fanfic #2 Great chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 04:02 CDT
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Great job on this chapter. I like #2 fanfic Romeo and Romeo. I like all of them but #2 is my favorite and #3 is next.
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Reviewed By: cas [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeallz!!* Luved the lemony goodness! I can't wait to find out what Kura'z plan is. Awwe. So sweet! He won't take Ryou with him! Ah! But what if Ryou doesn't want to leave his side? Dum dum dum. O_o Yes, I am weird. Update soon and nice work! *thumbz-up*
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Title: good story wanna read mine (A)
Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: June 21, 2005 05:13 CDT
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ahw.. this is cute.. bakura is falling for ryou ^_^ anyways keep up the good work and I enjoyed the lemon. and please update sooner!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (Who speaks a little Spanish) On: June 20, 2005 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, it was Spanish. Don't worry though, I wasn't insulting you. Anyways, I love the chapter! It was great and lemony goodness filled us all! I love it...love it...LOVE IT! I can't wait for you to continue!
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Reviewed By: cas [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo! this s getting interesting! how could u do this 2 me!? stopping it right there! ur cruel. ^_^ i can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: La perezosa uno, Crystal56 On: June 04, 2005 17:33 CDT
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Me gusta! LOL Seriously, I look forwards to the next chapter update and the upcoming LEMON! It won't be NC, will it?
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Reviewed By: forever broken (lazyness) On: June 04, 2005 04:15 CDT
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yaaay another chapter *squeee* how sweet ryou is in love?! whahaha and yaay lemon.. wow obsession *angelface* anyhooble, I loved the chapter, especially the part where ryou took the ring (wow that sounds like lord of the rings: took the ring)
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