| "Stealing My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (who's lazy and won't log in.) On: July 03, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A work of art or Romeo and Romeo, both sound pretty good to me. I hate angsty ending but you did set it in the past and twas to be expected unless you were changing the destinies of everyone. (My story Duel of Love will end saddly too, like, worse than yours it's sad.) Anways, that was good and I look forward to your next story!
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Title: #2
Reviewed By: ^__^ On: July 02, 2005 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo I'm all for fanfic #2 Great chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 04:02 CDT
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Great job on this chapter. I like #2 fanfic Romeo and Romeo. I like all of them but #2 is my favorite and #3 is next.
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Reviewed By: cas [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeallz!!* Luved the lemony goodness! I can't wait to find out what Kura'z plan is. Awwe. So sweet! He won't take Ryou with him! Ah! But what if Ryou doesn't want to leave his side? Dum dum dum. O_o Yes, I am weird. Update soon and nice work! *thumbz-up*
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Title: good story wanna read mine (A)
Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: June 21, 2005 05:13 CDT
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ahw.. this is cute.. bakura is falling for ryou ^_^ anyways keep up the good work and I enjoyed the lemon. and please update sooner!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (Who speaks a little Spanish) On: June 20, 2005 21:51 CDT
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Yeah, it was Spanish. Don't worry though, I wasn't insulting you. Anyways, I love the chapter! It was great and lemony goodness filled us all! I love it...love it...LOVE IT! I can't wait for you to continue!
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Reviewed By: cas [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo! this s getting interesting! how could u do this 2 me!? stopping it right there! ur cruel. ^_^ i can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: La perezosa uno, Crystal56 On: June 04, 2005 17:33 CDT
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Me gusta! LOL Seriously, I look forwards to the next chapter update and the upcoming LEMON! It won't be NC, will it?
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Reviewed By: forever broken (lazyness) On: June 04, 2005 04:15 CDT
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yaaay another chapter *squeee* how sweet ryou is in love?! whahaha and yaay lemon.. wow obsession *angelface* anyhooble, I loved the chapter, especially the part where ryou took the ring (wow that sounds like lord of the rings: took the ring)
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryou is very forward when he's had a little wine very cute. I like this a lot. I was really laughing when he took off with the ring. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (who's laziness precedes her) On: May 13, 2005 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter! I look forward to seeing how this developes!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon,please
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 (without the drive to log in) On: May 06, 2005 16:21 CDT
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Coolness! I look forward to seeing how this developes!
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Reviewed By: eve (forever broken) On: May 06, 2005 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a good chapter to begin with! so stop whining about it not being good! it's great!! and poor ryou! being beaten by those evil boys and they say he's a demon *pouts*! i realy wanna know who saved him.. and wow.. I've got a lot of questions! so PLEASE write a new chapter really really quick!! eve
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: May 05, 2005 16:33 CDT
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...............This is the best first chapter I've seen in a long time. I can't wait for the rest of it! I love the evil boys and the piss pot bit. Poor Ryou and I want to know who saved him. How old is he anyways? I got a bunch of questions and I can't wait for chapter two to see if that answers any of them. Keep writing and update soon! Thank You. DK;)
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