| "Prisoner of the Firebending Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Twilight Garden On: December 20, 2006 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just great I really enjoyed this story because for some reason I actually enjoy this pairng.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lotus Kajin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I myself had been thinking about a fan fic or RP SL that involved the two of them. I really enjoyed reading it.=3
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Title: Hottmama
Reviewed By: Hottmama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story wow i agree plz write more chapters if you can plz.
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Title: Prisoner Of The Firebending Prince
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: TorhuLuV_ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi ya i lv the fic its nice and cute heheheheh!So write more chappys plz ok well thank you for writing the story bye and have a nice day! and no presure! ^.~
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Title: Prisoner Of The Firebending Prince
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 17:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? And you should know the Katara is a waterbender not an airbender. Get your facts right.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: The Shadow Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 05:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a cool story but you said katara was a air bender when she is a water bender. no harm done though! - The Shadow Inu
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Reviewed By: crimsontears69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
throughly enjoyable. hope to read more form you soon.
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Title: Fruit Loops
Reviewed By: Fruit Loops [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ummm, first of all this is sick ^.^ i mean really grose, i luv Katara, how can you? *tears* nicley written though. But i have to say to the other person who reviewed this, you can't help it if you have pleasure when someone touches you, you can despise that person but no matter what, it's just natural that you would get a pleasure out of this...I'm sorry, but it's true. Rape is horrible (ESPECIALLY WHEN IT HAPPENS TO KATARA! the star of all my fics.) but people can't help it, it happens uncontrollably. I don't know this for sure.,..yea i do, but I've never been raped before so i guess I'm only 99.9% sure. Good fic, maybe u can do a whole, "Sokka and Aang comes back to save Katara" thing. Good job though! ~Fruit Loops
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Reviewed By: caeria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an excellent grasp of storytelling. All the technical aspects were right on - spelling, grammar, etc. However, the subject matter ruined the whole thing for me. I know you mentioned in your heading that it was a rape fic, but that's not enough. Rape is never about pleasure and someone who has just been raped isn't going to find ANY comfort in their rapest. You could have taken this the other way and shown how truly tramatic a rape really is. I was disappointed in this fairy-tale, sugar-coated, rape fantasy.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Blink blink* another one-shot that could've been continued. *sigh* whatever, good fic. bye
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Blink blink* another one-shot that could've been continued. *sigh* whatever, good fic. bye
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Title: Wow, that was good!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
There aren't many Avatar fanfics out there but this one was very good. You could easily make this a continuation or even an epic. Either way great job!
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Title: sakayora
Reviewed By: sakayora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
*stares* wow....
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Title: Geminidragon
Reviewed By: Geminidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good! I loved it! Do you think that you could do a sequel about Aang and Sokko trying to find her? Maybe you could make Aang a little jealous or something? Love your work! Bye!
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