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"One Shot Series" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ]
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 Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2008 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
.....................don't you think it's a little off that InuYasha "thinks" he is "falling" in love with Kikyou, when he already knows he loved her and pretty much promised to marry her? Cause it seems to me your twisting the original story to meet your own angsty needs. You want him to be even more confused than he is in the manga! InuYasha knows he loved Kikyou, the conflict is over who he will choose to be with in the end, not whether he loves one or the other, it's painfully obvious that he loves them both! If you want more angst of your own creation and not of the actual manga like that, make sure you mark it alternate universe, cause your stories are warped and disappointing for those of us expecting canon. Sorry, had to say it as soon as I read "InuYasha felt he was leaning towards Kikyou now." .....................yeah, that was just fucked up.
 Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2008 00:41 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i just found out one of my friends has Leukemia so im going to show her this story and see what she does.
 Reviewed By: pupp [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2007 18:13 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG BEAUTIFUL OBLIVION MADE ME CRY SO MUCH I LUV IT
 Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 11, 2007 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
that made me cry
 Title: A New Step
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 01, 2006 18:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Sango and Sesshy, wow...there's a pairing that I had never even thought of! But you did well! Good job! :D
 Title: Self-Destruction
Reviewed By: REDSILVERDRAGON3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2006 20:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love that chapter. My favorite band is Nine Inch Nails so thank you for using that song. Great chapter. Very dark. Loved it.
 Title: The Sickies
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2006 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, it looks like you are experimenting with other pairings. I had only read one SangoInu before this one. Interesting...are you going to do NarKag next? Just kidding, lol. Nice one-shot and happy writing!
 Title: kyoko
Reviewed By: Wolf_spirt [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
i thought it would be a good happy story. i read oblivion somethig and it made me cry. i love your style of writing but try to make it just a LITTLE bit happier next. but good job
 Title: Graduation
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2006 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWW KAWAII!!! I adore it! I like SessKag occasionally and your oneshot was short and smuffy. Lovely!
 Title: Inu no Baka
Reviewed By: sangohuntress [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 04, 2006 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
He's so thickskulled, he doesn't know whom he loves. Yeah, that sounds like our hanyou. I actually felt sorry for Kagome in this and I don't even like her character.
 Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI)  On: May 29, 2006 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read them and if it helps I know how you feel when it comes to reviews. You get all these hits and not a single review to show for it. A couple of my stories are like that... Anyhow trust me you do have a loyal reader here for these one shots of yours and I hope to see more
 Title: I wanna know what love is
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life NSI  On: May 23, 2006 16:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sigh...a happy ending one-shot...:D:D. It helps that I absolutely LOVE that song. It's great to see another one-shot from you.
 Reviewed By: Angel_4_life NSI  On: May 02, 2006 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW :) They wuv each other! Okay, I'm hyper, as usual, because I just had a jumbo freezie! Anyways, I love it! DIE KIKYO!!! Heh. It's been awhile since you've written a one-shot.
 Reviewed By: Anggie  On: May 01, 2006 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the Valentine fic because you never see kagome/Hojo and its nice to know he finally got some even in one fic. I also liked I could fall in love its sad though. Anyway I should be writing a 3 page essay so, Good Job I like the fics
 Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2006 21:33 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw. 'Getting Tired' was so cute. Not too angsty and no lemon or anything. Just good ol' fashioned cuteness. Great job. I loved it.
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