| "Truths Reviled" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: waterslave1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 19:09 CDT
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You have a lot of spelling mistakes. Tongue is not tong. Groan not grown. There not theer. Were not Where. Spell check doesn't fix everything. You need to read the stories over and if you can't catch your won mistakes get a beta to read your story before you post it.
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Reviewed By: DragonRider035 On: December 02, 2007 15:12 CST
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Pretty good story, but please use spell check. It makes things really hard when you have to read around misspelled words and bad grammer. Beta readers are your friend.
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Reviewed By: dragonmagic2114 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh so cool. :D...Hope more are to come. ;)
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Title: Kome
Reviewed By: Kome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story and i enjoyed it ALOT but your grammer was really bad. I'd suggest getting a beta reader or something like that.
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Title: Truths Reviled
Reviewed By: Prince Mika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story!! i also liked the end, it was fluffy!!!!!!!!!!! well, not much fluffy, but fluffy none-the-less!!! you should make a sequel 'bout ed and roy and such well, i really liked this fic!!!keep up the good work with others!!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Technokitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that is so...wow....Ok you must update with the next chapter as soon as posible!
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Reviewed By: Kuramalvr6 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwhahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! OMG! this story makes me fell evil!!!! lol sorry but the idea of edward and Roy being left ALONE at their house...yeah ^-^ but then againthat ok with me! Update soon cause i can't wait for more!
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Title: WHAO!!!
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS AWSOME!!! i hope it wasn't a one-nit-stand... THAT WOULD SURE MAKE THINGS INTERESTING THOU!! Keep it goin'!!
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Title: WoW O.O
Reviewed By: Kuramalvr6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW i can't believe that i'm the first one to review for your story! it's so great i can't believe no one has ever said so before. Anyway loved chapter 2 even though the first one was great also...hope to hear from you soon!
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