| "Mate of the Forbidden Child" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: law916 On: September 09, 2005 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it your story is good and lemon was hot. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Ladyfox20 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 14:05 EDT
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Nice I love it.
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Reviewed By: Ladyfox20 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 16:37 EDT
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I love this story! I am happy that you now have help in writeing this story. I shale be calm until you finish it. Untill then happy writing
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Title: M.O.T.F.C.
Reviewed By: unamed On: August 26, 2005 17:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
Would you update already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is not sitting while with me!!!!!!!! You'er not updating and I'm not happy about that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 21:17 EDT
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Pronglet? Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: BlackAngelChan On: July 16, 2005 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow awesome story. Try doing something in the OotP pov. Continue this story.
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Reviewed By: Bandgeek On: June 29, 2005 05:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another good story. A good idea in my opinion for one of the future chapter would be seeing how Harry gets control of his new powers if he does at all.
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Reviewed By: Elena On: June 28, 2005 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fanfics that i have read. please continue with this one. your use of words is very good. this is the first hp/yyh crossover i hace read and it is Very good.
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Reviewed By: Hiei's_lover On: June 23, 2005 17:38 EDT
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you got Hieis hight wrong. he is 4'10.
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Reviewed By: Harry&Hiei's_fav_gurl On: June 23, 2005 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS UP DATE SSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! how about adding hedwig with a letter written to harry from dumbledore? it might inspire something for the story. thought it would help. Ta!
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the setting that you have going on here. I hope that you continue with this story. I can't wait for harry to go back to Hogwarts. Ta!
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Title: M.O.T.F.C.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 26, 2005 16:30 EDT
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WOULD YOU HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: random chick On: May 18, 2005 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well... this is a very interesting take. I don't believe I've ever seen a HieixHarry fic before, much less a lemon. you did a good job and I compliment your creativity. the fire demon's language was a bit... well, it looked like you just tossed it in there at the last minute, like it didn't belong. also, Hiei was slightly OOC, plus describing his heart as black and icy was a bit extreme. yes, he's a jerk and he's very sarcastic, but he isn't cruel or evil! think about Yukina, and what he went through for her! he got his jagan eye just to find, dammit! your lemon could use some work, but it was good. are you new in that catagory? well, update soon, ja matta!
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Reviewed By: baka kitsuune brat On: May 18, 2005 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo sweet!! Please sent Hedwig with the next chapter soon, okay? See ya!! ^__^
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