| "Mate of the Forbidden Child" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elena On: June 28, 2005 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fanfics that i have read. please continue with this one. your use of words is very good. this is the first hp/yyh crossover i hace read and it is Very good.
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Reviewed By: Hiei's_lover On: June 23, 2005 17:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
you got Hieis hight wrong. he is 4'10.
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Reviewed By: Harry&Hiei's_fav_gurl On: June 23, 2005 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS UP DATE SSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! how about adding hedwig with a letter written to harry from dumbledore? it might inspire something for the story. thought it would help. Ta!
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the setting that you have going on here. I hope that you continue with this story. I can't wait for harry to go back to Hogwarts. Ta!
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Title: M.O.T.F.C.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 26, 2005 16:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
WOULD YOU HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: random chick On: May 18, 2005 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well... this is a very interesting take. I don't believe I've ever seen a HieixHarry fic before, much less a lemon. you did a good job and I compliment your creativity. the fire demon's language was a bit... well, it looked like you just tossed it in there at the last minute, like it didn't belong. also, Hiei was slightly OOC, plus describing his heart as black and icy was a bit extreme. yes, he's a jerk and he's very sarcastic, but he isn't cruel or evil! think about Yukina, and what he went through for her! he got his jagan eye just to find, dammit! your lemon could use some work, but it was good. are you new in that catagory? well, update soon, ja matta!
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Reviewed By: baka kitsuune brat On: May 18, 2005 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo sweet!! Please sent Hedwig with the next chapter soon, okay? See ya!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: chibi_readfreak On: May 14, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I was plesently surprised when I saw an HP/YYH crossover. This is the first of it's kind I have seen I enjoyed every minuet of it(especially the hot sex scene ^_^). I hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: May 12, 2005 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cooool!! You have an unusual but great paring going for you. Please update soon!!
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Title: M.O.T.F.C.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 11, 2005 16:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
OHHH! That was so good. Please write another chapter soon. You need to change a few things. Not really but I had to put that in there other wise the review would not be excpted.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:11 EDT
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I LOVED it! I LOVED it! I LOVED IT! You have no idea how true those words are! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
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Title: MOFG
Reviewed By: bwlj ( bookwormloverjen ) On: May 10, 2005 13:04 EDT
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that was GREAT..... haven't seen too many Hiei and Harry pairings... plz continue pretty plz.... great sex sence
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Title: Mate of the Forbidden Child
Reviewed By: ECampbell On: May 09, 2005 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I have been waiting for a Hiei/Harry pairing. Thank you so much. This is definetly the most creative pairings for a YYH/HP crossover I've seen yet. Update soon!
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Title: M.O.T.F.C.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 07, 2005 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You did great with your grammer. Friends wanted me to mention that sorry. You must write more Please. You can't end it like that!
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