Title: that's hilarious!
Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It all runs together because you did not put lines between the disclaimers, author's notes, and the actual story, which kind of annoyed me. Besides that, I thought this was a hilarious story. I haven't read something that funny in a while. Thank you for the laugh. Please write more stuff! ;)
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