| "The Problem With Transferring Schools" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: man known as ryushi On: March 08, 2006 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting cross-over mixing yu yu hakusho and full metal panic. I would like to make a few suggestions for your next chapter, these are mearly suggestions and are to use on your choosing. sosuke should be more protective of kaname perhaps when kuwabara is trying to speak with her? of course you need to have kaname hit sosuke lol also maybe you could add kurz, melissa, botan and keiko into it. Anyway keep writing (=
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Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's fun to see this combination, unfortunately there are no more chapters, what's going on?
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Reviewed By: L On: August 16, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just recently come into the world of FMP, and this is my first tour of the fanfiction. And I gotta say I like this one very much. Keep up the good work. Sincerely Liz
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Reviewed By: ghostreader1 On: August 13, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok, I'll bite. smallish sample so far, but I like what I see, and it has real potential. More would be nice.... please?
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Reviewed By: StarX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good so far, but, in my opinion, it ended way too soon. I would like to see where this is going. Update soon please!!!!!!!
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