| "The Other Side of the Story" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dude person On: July 18, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please write more. Im interested like crazy! Please oh please write more. I'll come back for every chapter and review! I promise!
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Reviewed By: DPM On: May 08, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, you got me. I am intrigued. Very unusual plot and leaves the readers on edge with what's to unfold. The only thing that would make it an easier read is to use more often the paragraph functions especially as you drift between thoughts of Sess and Rin..... Please do continue since this reader wants to know.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: mushi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story and the that Sessh's Mother is human is a great idea! Is human Sessh ewaring his usual outfit or something different? A human Sessh would be interesting to draw.
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