| "Heartbreak" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: actually...
Reviewed By: mercynre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
that's the end of the story... but I am still working on other character death arc pieces that are in the same universe as that one, so there will be a followup story of how Seto copes. It was Jonouchi by the way - it says so in the ending of the second chapter.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Tj plus digimon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more and more. Who is it joey or yugi?
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 12:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! Mokie's broken hearted...and Seto's with the mutt. (it IS joey...right?) POOR MOKIE!!! Update sooN!!!
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