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| "Wicked Ground" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Title: One sexy story!!!
Reviewed By: Yvie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really have anything to add because my title sums it up for me. This is one sexy story!!! I especially liked the slogan mentioned, 'Be good, have fun, use protection and don't get caught' It fits this story really well! I love it!!!
| Reviewed By: Shinomori Kyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter!
| Reviewed By: TsumeIshida [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I followed you! Hee! Love the story, like I've said before...unless I didn't. I forgot to whom I review... Anyway, I love the chemistry between Kyo and Yuya, and the added drama between Kyoshiro and Yuya. It's so wonderful. Your cliffies are evil though. Evil! Thus, you should post your newest chapter as soon as possible. Yep, yep. That's right. Update! Please!
| Reviewed By: ZionCross On: May 16, 2005 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya, eternity, how are you? I'm glad I was able to navigate through to this place, ^^. This chapter is awesome! Update soon, ja? I'll be waiting to see just how Sakuya Mibu will answer. Considering that Yuya and Sakuya cannot get along at the moment (with her sleeping with Sakuya's husband and all).
| Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 16, 2005 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it. Sorry you had to move, I was a fan there and I will be a fan here.
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Reviewed By: Mirror-The-GothGoddess On: May 15, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT, jus' kiddin'. I'm sorry for what happened at Fanfiction, oh, and if i was able to go higher for the enjoyment facter, i woulda, but i cant... which sucks, well your story is awsome. I'm gonna some too, will you read? I'll be Mirror-The-GothGoddess! i hope you'll like my stories. i have stories on FictionPress.com too, my name there is Mirror-The-GothGoddess, if you wanto read any of my fanfics, then go there and go to search and search my name. I LOVE sdk, really exiting if you ask me.
| Reviewed By: Wandering-Phantom On: May 15, 2005 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter ! I love your story ! continue !
| Reviewed By: Gohanslover On: May 15, 2005 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it , of course, once again. the little twist and cliffy at the end was great! but for refernce, appelate, and respondent, are used only in appeals court. you might want to use Defendant and Victim, next time around. Oh, I left you a long and longorous message in your fanfiction account, so it would please me if you checked that account again, thanks it was a long review. not really a review, more a message from me to you. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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