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Reviewed By: zioncross On: June 02, 2005 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, there's definitely a lot of sexual frustration between those two. Yep...can't believe they're procrastinating like this, though. ^^. Well, I'll be waiting for you next chapter. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: zioncross On: June 02, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a pretty intense chapter. Oh wait...you have two chapters up, don't you? ^^, I'll read that one next.
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Reviewed By: LadyWater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good chap. I can't wait to read the make-up secne between them. Up-date soon.
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Reviewed By: Nyankosamurai506 On: May 31, 2005 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! Kyo's being a little bit bipolar again!( he does that alot doesn't he). Good chapter(well two chapters^_^). Please update soon-I really want to see the conclusion!!! *MEW!*=^-^= P.S. Do you read the manga on top of watching the anime? If not you REALLY should(its alot better).
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Reviewed By: Gohanslover On: May 29, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was BLOWN away by this chapter. Absolutely blown away. I can't beleive you're in high school, and have such a developed talent as a writer. it's unbeleiveable! I'm glad you now seem most at ease with legal jargin, the court scenewas well thought out, and gave a lot of great detail, that was needed to make this such a great story. I just finished the other chapter you've written, as well as this one, and I lvoe the other to most. The "Ivy" scene is a great piece of work. You evoked a lot of emotion in that story,I'm sorry I haven't emailed you in a long time, I just got out of New york, and I haven't used a computer in about 3 days I'll make sure to fire one off to you tonight. thanks so, much and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 29, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive me if I am wrong... but weren't your chapters longer before? Not a big prob, they still pack the same great punch. You got a cool story here, buddie! Plus here, at media miner, you can up your rating. Then the infamous "booty" can be achieved. Hooray! Update soon, ceya
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Reviewed By: Wolfwoodss On: May 28, 2005 11:44 CDT
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Awesome! Another great chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: LadyWater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I'm so glad that you have up-dated. Your writing style gets better all the time! Up-date soon!
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Title: Keep up the good work!
Reviewed By: nyankosamurai506(from FF.net) On: May 22, 2005 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story, the charaters are well rounded and the plot is very original^_^I was rather upset to hear that FF.net doesn't even check before deleting stories, I hope that you arn't too upset over it anymore-I'll continue reading your story here! Hurry and update! *MEW!*=^-^=
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 21, 2005 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next... I feel pretty bad for Yuya cause Kyo is going to go crazy on her for the entire IVy thing... oh well, see ya next chapter
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Title: Wicked Ground
Reviewed By: wolfwoodss On: May 21, 2005 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was amazing! I love it. Please continue! ^__^
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Reviewed By: ZionCross On: May 20, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it seems like you're getting better with each chapter you write. ^^ Yeah, I love seeing how calmly Yuya acts when she's professional. Didn't see none of that earlier...wow. But you know, I have a strong feeling that there is a trump card that Yuya does not know about yet. Then again, I could be paranoid, ^^. Well, you keep it up, sempai! Update soon, alright!!! Ja Ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinomori Kyo (too lazy to log in) On: May 20, 2005 16:45 CDT
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Ah, I love the new chapter. So, poor little Benitora was pushed into a wall...
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Title: I LUV Y'ALL!
Reviewed By: Eternitys_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:57 CDT
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THANK YOU ALL!!! I
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Reviewed By: Gohanslover On: May 19, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darlin', it's been a long time since your last update. and I'm jsut hoping every things all right, and that you'll find the time to update soon! Please E-mail me if you ogt my fanfiction.net review. I would really like to hear from about that. My E-mail address once again is Availblegurl@yahoo.com. please feel free to E-mail me at any time. please Update soon! I'm anxious to see what happens in the next chapter to Skauya's testimony, and how Yuya counters it!!!!!!!!
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