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Title: Keep up the good work!
Reviewed By: nyankosamurai506(from FF.net) On: May 22, 2005 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story, the charaters are well rounded and the plot is very original^_^I was rather upset to hear that FF.net doesn't even check before deleting stories, I hope that you arn't too upset over it anymore-I'll continue reading your story here! Hurry and update! *MEW!*=^-^=
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 21, 2005 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next... I feel pretty bad for Yuya cause Kyo is going to go crazy on her for the entire IVy thing... oh well, see ya next chapter
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Title: Wicked Ground
Reviewed By: wolfwoodss On: May 21, 2005 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was amazing! I love it. Please continue! ^__^
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Reviewed By: ZionCross On: May 20, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it seems like you're getting better with each chapter you write. ^^ Yeah, I love seeing how calmly Yuya acts when she's professional. Didn't see none of that earlier...wow. But you know, I have a strong feeling that there is a trump card that Yuya does not know about yet. Then again, I could be paranoid, ^^. Well, you keep it up, sempai! Update soon, alright!!! Ja Ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinomori Kyo (too lazy to log in) On: May 20, 2005 16:45 CDT
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Ah, I love the new chapter. So, poor little Benitora was pushed into a wall...
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Title: I LUV Y'ALL!
Reviewed By: Eternitys_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU ALL!!! I
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Reviewed By: Gohanslover On: May 19, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darlin', it's been a long time since your last update. and I'm jsut hoping every things all right, and that you'll find the time to update soon! Please E-mail me if you ogt my fanfiction.net review. I would really like to hear from about that. My E-mail address once again is Availblegurl@yahoo.com. please feel free to E-mail me at any time. please Update soon! I'm anxious to see what happens in the next chapter to Skauya's testimony, and how Yuya counters it!!!!!!!!
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Title: One sexy story!!!
Reviewed By: Yvie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really have anything to add because my title sums it up for me. This is one sexy story!!! I especially liked the slogan mentioned, 'Be good, have fun, use protection and don't get caught' It fits this story really well! I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinomori Kyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: TsumeIshida [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I followed you! Hee! Love the story, like I've said before...unless I didn't. I forgot to whom I review... Anyway, I love the chemistry between Kyo and Yuya, and the added drama between Kyoshiro and Yuya. It's so wonderful. Your cliffies are evil though. Evil! Thus, you should post your newest chapter as soon as possible. Yep, yep. That's right. Update! Please!
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Reviewed By: ZionCross On: May 16, 2005 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya, eternity, how are you? I'm glad I was able to navigate through to this place, ^^. This chapter is awesome! Update soon, ja? I'll be waiting to see just how Sakuya Mibu will answer. Considering that Yuya and Sakuya cannot get along at the moment (with her sleeping with Sakuya's husband and all).
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 16, 2005 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it. Sorry you had to move, I was a fan there and I will be a fan here.
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Title: GothGoddess19y
Reviewed By: Mirror-The-GothGoddess On: May 15, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT, jus' kiddin'. I'm sorry for what happened at Fanfiction, oh, and if i was able to go higher for the enjoyment facter, i woulda, but i cant... which sucks, well your story is awsome. I'm gonna some too, will you read? I'll be Mirror-The-GothGoddess! i hope you'll like my stories. i have stories on FictionPress.com too, my name there is Mirror-The-GothGoddess, if you wanto read any of my fanfics, then go there and go to search and search my name. I LOVE sdk, really exiting if you ask me.
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Reviewed By: Wandering-Phantom On: May 15, 2005 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter ! I love your story ! continue !
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Reviewed By: Gohanslover On: May 15, 2005 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it , of course, once again. the little twist and cliffy at the end was great! but for refernce, appelate, and respondent, are used only in appeals court. you might want to use Defendant and Victim, next time around. Oh, I left you a long and longorous message in your fanfiction account, so it would please me if you checked that account again, thanks it was a long review. not really a review, more a message from me to you. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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