| "Wicked Ground" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: nyankosamurai On: June 05, 2005 19:13 CDT
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Guilty...was he pleading guilty? Ohhhh...Kyo CAN'T go to jail(imagine how he would occupy himself!^_^;;). Well please update soon! I'm on the edge of my...bed?(Laptop user) *MEW!*=^-^=
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: X-tal On: June 05, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GUILTY!!! Ughh...I hate these cliff hangers...UPDATE! I cant wait!! ^^ Anyways lovely fan fic. ^^ Its awesome!
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Title: Wicked Ground
Reviewed By: Wolfwoods [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 02:38 CDT
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Guilty? GUILTY!? NO KYO!!! what? But- oh i can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: June 04, 2005 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, man! Maybe he has to be in house arrest. Yuya's house that is! :D Don't let him go to jail... Poor Yuya. Her first case lost to that jackass of a lawyer. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: Wandering-Phantom On: June 04, 2005 12:37 CDT
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Hmpf ! You HAVE TO update !! And very soon ! You can't let us with this cliffy !!
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Reviewed By: TsumeIshido On: June 04, 2005 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaahhhh!!! You're so evil! Hahahahahaha!!! That aside, love the story. I love the plot (and twists, yea!) and the casting, um, portrayal, of the characters. It's a great story, keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: zioncross On: June 03, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guilty? Are you kidding me!? >< They found him guilty of self-defense...you have...got...to be kidding me. Ah, now you've got me hanging by the computer, waiting for the next chapter, ^^ Update whenever you can. There's no rush. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: zioncross On: June 02, 2005 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, there's definitely a lot of sexual frustration between those two. Yep...can't believe they're procrastinating like this, though. ^^. Well, I'll be waiting for you next chapter. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: zioncross On: June 02, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a pretty intense chapter. Oh wait...you have two chapters up, don't you? ^^, I'll read that one next.
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Reviewed By: LadyWater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good chap. I can't wait to read the make-up secne between them. Up-date soon.
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Reviewed By: Nyankosamurai506 On: May 31, 2005 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! Kyo's being a little bit bipolar again!( he does that alot doesn't he). Good chapter(well two chapters^_^). Please update soon-I really want to see the conclusion!!! *MEW!*=^-^= P.S. Do you read the manga on top of watching the anime? If not you REALLY should(its alot better).
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Reviewed By: Gohanslover On: May 29, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was BLOWN away by this chapter. Absolutely blown away. I can't beleive you're in high school, and have such a developed talent as a writer. it's unbeleiveable! I'm glad you now seem most at ease with legal jargin, the court scenewas well thought out, and gave a lot of great detail, that was needed to make this such a great story. I just finished the other chapter you've written, as well as this one, and I lvoe the other to most. The "Ivy" scene is a great piece of work. You evoked a lot of emotion in that story,I'm sorry I haven't emailed you in a long time, I just got out of New york, and I haven't used a computer in about 3 days I'll make sure to fire one off to you tonight. thanks so, much and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: May 29, 2005 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive me if I am wrong... but weren't your chapters longer before? Not a big prob, they still pack the same great punch. You got a cool story here, buddie! Plus here, at media miner, you can up your rating. Then the infamous "booty" can be achieved. Hooray! Update soon, ceya
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Reviewed By: Wolfwoodss On: May 28, 2005 11:44 CDT
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Awesome! Another great chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: LadyWater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I'm so glad that you have up-dated. Your writing style gets better all the time! Up-date soon!
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