Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2001 12:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey Jade, wow another superb chapter. Ah man that Kyris, you hold him down and i'll punch him! How could he betray them like that! Well you know i can't wait for the next chapter, so keep up the great writing for me ja...! |