| "The First Day Together" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: law916 On: July 02, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work. I have love your work.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great conclusion to a wonderful and warm side story. I look forward to many, many more stories (I can beg, can't I?). I'm having trouble reviewing the latest chapter of "The Heights of Demon Bonds," so I will take the liberty here of pointing out that it was one bodaciously large, perfectly sweetened, pitcher of lemonade.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 14:49 CDT
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How is this the last chapter? anyway, great job!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 29, 2005 00:25 CDT
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oh im so sorry that i did not review the first time when i read this story. I really like this story
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 18:34 CDT
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sexy...i like the blood as lube
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 20:06 CDT
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YAY! i know, i should be betaing right now, but i will have ur story done by thursday and then fics will come back faster...FINALS ARE DONE ON WED.
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Title: first day together
Reviewed By: bec-wan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and the series that goes with this....can not wait for more and I will be in line for the next lemonade sale....Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 19:47 CDT
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CUTE! mmm...chocolate covered Kurama what is the url of the pic of the crib?
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Reviewed By: Yutaka Yumi On: May 22, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still think this is a awesome story. Please keep up the great work and I can't wait for a update.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black too lazzy to sign in x.x On: May 16, 2005 20:14 CDT
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O_______O awesome!! please update!!!
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