| "Kagome's Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 02:45 CST
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I love this story I think this was a second time I have read it exsept what you added I hope you do continue I'm curious if they find shippo and I hope kagome is akito's sister..I just hope I read the clur\es right if not oh well lol
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:38 CST
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Sorry for double posting but I found out something about kikyo. She never has to use the bathroom there are no....umm..holes. None! So no sex for inuyasha! She's pretty empty inside except for the souls the she...uh eats. She was made of clay even though the old bitch stole her remains she still had to bake her. So she had cold hard clay skin...and smelled like death...ewwwww. Dear god use this information please! It would serve inuyasha right!! Lol! And he can't be with kagome! He should really be alone at the end of the story. No friends and no kagome. I'd leave him if I was sango and miroku and look for kagome. Feel free to use eny of my ideas. And if you get writers block I can help you with that too. I like helping people so if you need me I'm here.
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Title: Jeezzz....
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This could be so much better. Inuyasha does not act like that. Watch the anime or read the manga. He cares about kagome! As for kikyo..we all know what happens to her in the end. Inuyasha would go looking for kagome NO MATTER WHAT. As for sessh/kag pairing...ehhh. I've read way too many of them.Lol! I'm used to him being with Rin or kagura. There are only a few Kag/Sessh that I like (very few) Because they just don't work as a pair. At all. I like him as a nasty basterd. Lol! Just please put inuyasha back in character again. Oh by the way keep kikyo evil. A nice sessh is verrrry creepy. This isn't a flame you did an okay job! It's just strange that inuyasha is waaaaay waaaaay out of chacter. You sould set sessh up with an original character in future stories. I'd like to see where you would take a stories like that.
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEKKKKK!!!!!!!! OMFG!! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!....ithink i have a pretty good idea though....
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 18:48 CDT
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oh come on that's it? no updates?
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 20:00 CDT
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Are you goin to finish what you started or what come on. i like it. please update*puppydog eyes*
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