| "Learning to Live Again" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 20:37 CDT
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When will u update? I love it and am patiently waiting lol and thank u!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now THIS is a good story! No bashing kikyo, kagome,Inuyasha,sango or shippo.Lol! Maybe a little miroku bashing. I love kikyo/sessh pairings! As long as there's no kagome and Inuyasha bashing. Great job! We need more sessh/kikyo stories! ^_^
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Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 21:54 CDT
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THAT WAS GREAT UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! you must update! i skimmed thru it like years ago and earlier i was thinking bout reading it all theway thru and wen i seen u had updated i felt like today was lucky for me lol update soon!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay I'm a sicko, but I thought the sex with Naraku was quite HOT! Yummy tentacle action! I loved how Kikyo helped the wind witch. I thought that was wonderful.
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Title: Darn
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:38 CDT
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Sesshomaru is being so mean. I don't like Kikyo but she has my sympathy.
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 15:04 CDT
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I felt really bad for Rin. On what Kikyo is doing, well I can understand her going on with him. *shifty eyes* I know she's going off for revenge. But still- Its Naraku, the hottie that he is. I am curious as to what his motives are also. great Update!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 20:32 CDT
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I loved this chapter. The fight between the two brothers was good. I felt sorry for Inuyasha and what he was feeling. Ohhs now what is Sesshoumaru going to do to Kikyo when he wakes up? Hope to see more soon!! I am a little late on reviewing. Better late than never, ne?
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Reviewed By: Arwen Dark Sorceress Of Fate On: September 14, 2005 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just because I coulnd't resist to leave you a review over here, well I think you must already know that I love your fics, specially since the pairing is SessKik which I love, I think it's kind of nice to see their possible relationship in such a dark light.
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Reviewed By: lonely_dreamlover On: August 27, 2005 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so disappointed to see that this particular fic of yours wasn't in ff.net anymore. I really looked forward to this. I'm so glad I remembered you had this posted here. The story just gets better and better with each chappie (esp. this one)!!! You portrayed Naraku exactly as I see him. He's the kind of obsessed evil guy but cares for his err, obsession. I liked the shifting in his mood. Naraku really touched me in this chappie. We finally see his softie side. This chappie- no, this story, was a very good read. P.S. PLEASE WRITE MORE SESSKIK FICS!!!
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Reviewed By: youkai_obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 07:04 CDT
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This will be interesting to see how this long night turns out for all involved parties Oh Kouga and Sango together, that's hot!
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Reviewed By: Untamed Melody On: August 06, 2005 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!!!!!!! You update,but to my disappointment it was rather short but none the less,excellent.Hope you update soon. :):):):):):):):):)0:):0:):0:):0:):0:):0:):0:):0:):0
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 03:24 CDT
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Ohh that was another intense chapter. I'm so glad she gave him his arm back!! I feel the angst coming, its going to be interesting when they get to the village. Good chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Untamed Melody On: August 01, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley love this fic.I was really pissed of when I found out that this was erased at ffn,I kept on looking for it though.The suspense is killing me. I love your writing style it flows really well, but I have a question,is the next one going to be the last chap cause I'm gonna be really sad if it is though. Sesshoumaru beats the hell out of kikyou and soon after words starts fucking her,I think is a bit funny in a good way.But one problem though ...I can't believe Sesshoumaru used to like Kagome.Anyways update,update,update!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 03:27 CDT
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Chapter 12- Oh another evil cliffy!! Another great chapter from you. I loved her answer on who she belongs to. I didn't realize you had updated, thanks to a bug within the MM notification system. Some of us are not getting e-mails on story updates. Grr! Anyways great chapter, and it was hot also!!
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Title: P,S.
Reviewed By: gumi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my names got messed up o.o; gumi-sama and yuzy200 are both me so yeah...UPDATE! lol xD
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Title: Review Pat II
Reviewed By: gumi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(MM.org can't handle my long review! xD) As far as technical, I have found little or no obvious grammar/spelling mistakes (and if I did I can't remember them). Tips to you for actually using spell check (lol). Your style of writing is very good, keeps it flowing, not so detailed but enough to get the picture (as opposed to me who can't get enough details). Originality/Creativity gets a huge thumbs up to the fanfic idea. Sess/Kik is not my fav but a defiant spot in my heart as far as Inu pairings go. The whole concept of how everything is playing out with everyone (of importance to the love triangle ((or square or whatever shape it is now)) that is) is very well thought out and, yet again, I am delighted to see everyone's feelings kept real to their actual personalities. Also, I was positively delighted in the first chapter when it switched from Kikyo's pov to Kagome's, just reminds me of the attitude of every other Kag/Kik fanfic I see (also it shows your understanding of the two groups of haters and I find it hilarious how you can use both in the same fanfic). And as you can see my enjoyment factor of this fanfic is 11 and infinity! Well, I hope my rambling encourages or helps you in some way. I'm glad to hear you won't give up on this fanfic and hope you never do. If you do, you will probably get an equally long review on my disappointment and encouragement to get you started again. ^^ Sincerely, k-chan ^___^ (k-chan is taken so I leave you my AIM sn, yuzy200)
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Title: Review Part I
Reviewed By: yuzy200 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...like whoa... I'm absolutely overall impressed with this fanfic. You think it would be slightly offensive because it's so rough, but I think it's just right. This is probably one of the few fanfics where the characters are actually in character within the limits they're given (I mean in the real show I doubt Kikyo and Sesshomaru would end up like this). You are very talented in that this fanfic is not too aggressive since in most "real" fanfics I've seen, it gets too violent and gory that it's just kinda gross or it makes me depressed. Here it's enough to show the emotion but also be enjoyable and I want to keep reading (oh yes, I WANT to keep reading, you will update, yes you will). I love how you have Kikyo and Sesshomaru starting to feel something but not already head-over-heels for each other. Though, the two faults I see, is that I doubt Sesshomaru would ever let Rin get raped but hey, it's working with this fanfiction. Also for all the intelligence and wit Kikyo seems to have, you think she'd be able to explain sex or give better advice to Rin… But hey, if I woke up naked in that position (no pun intended) I don't think I'd be able to give good advice out of thin air either.
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Title: ...........
Reviewed By: melfire63-not logged in On: July 19, 2005 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, its a good story, but i just cant get over how....brutal sesshy is.....wow, i mean i understand the violence, but he is like beating her an inch from death and then a couple hours later, starts over again! its still a good story and u need to update, i kno im hooked, but wow, cant get over that! mel
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:28 CDT
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Ohhs what an evil, yet hot cliffy!! *coos* Oh the dark hottie told Kikyo that he loved her!! Another great emotion packed chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 05:06 CDT
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The last two chapters were great!! The whole dream sequence , really had me going. That was so dark!! *Loved it* Now why are both dreaming the same dream? I thought it was really good on how Kikyo explained being raped to Rin. ....I wonder how Inuyasha is going to re-act to finding out. Oh and what the dark hottie will do...
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Reviewed By: Nicotine On: July 06, 2005 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool stories....you are very talented...sad to say my friends wouldnt read this because of the pairing...their kinda closed minded lol
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 02:48 CDT
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0_0 Oh that was a dark chapter!! I loved it!! I think you are doing a great job keeping them both in character. Great story and great writing on this. Wow, you update quickly!! Good job on this chapter!!*swats damn spam code… try 3 now*
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 01:12 CDT
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Very good intense chapter. I love the way you are writing Sesshoumaru. Aww poor Rin!! Hope to see more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 08:28 CDT
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I thought this was a good chapter. It was nice seeing the two sisters together and talking like sisters do. Hope to see more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Danchik On: June 03, 2005 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good one. Way to Go!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 02:36 CDT
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Another good interesting angst chapter!! Cant wait to see more!! Love how Kikyo is wearing Kagome's clothes now!!
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. Not many stories out there where Kikyo isn't being bashed to hell. The lemon was HOT!! Love the way you have Sesshoumaru. Was good to see the dark hottie Naraku, well being the dark sexy assed hottie that he is. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more chapters from you!!!
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