| "From Here to Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wobbly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah....soo good it hurts ya know! Sorry for not making any reviews on each chapter...but I have read the whole thing and really wish for you to update, cause I tthink you're brilliant not just because of your story but also cause you seem to be updating much and I love it, frankly! keep it going!
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Title: Jack is the absolute best. You should make a whole nother chapter about him. X|
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: September 05, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, I Yashamaru really does seem like the "I'm never sick." type. My whole family is like that, so I should know. Jack was The Shit, and that geek with the bat was pretty cool. Gaara was really weird... Let's see more of the angsty Haku-ness, but I wish he was a little tougher. remember him being very, very tough in the anime. Ahh, yes. The lovely beauty that is tough, androynous males. (I'll bet I spelled that wrong.) Also, I can't wait to see some Tayuya/Mr. Plot action! That would be just awesome. ^_^ Please update and get over that writer's block soon.
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Reviewed By: Mochi~ On: September 04, 2005 17:24 CDT
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Kankuro.... Itachi... hot.. O_O YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE, DAMMIT! EVIL, EVIL WOMAN! O.O' -dies-
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 16:37 CDT
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I dunno... it feels like... something's missing from that chapter. Like, it was a good length, but not a LOT happened in each lil place. Donno what else to say, but hopefully you'll have the next chapter out in a couple of days.
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Reviewed By: bookworm51485 On: September 04, 2005 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you know what I just noticed, you have the same amount of reviews as Broken. Anyways to my review, well all I really wanted to say is that I think Yashamaru and Iruka are my favorite couple in this story. Their so cute, especially Yashamaru. I like the whole people always mistaking him for a woman things. And one other thing is that out of all the stories I'm reading, I think that yours is the mostly Readable. Meaning that in the other stories there are parts that I just skip over because I really don't want to read them but your story I read every word and don't find it troublesome to do so. And that says a lot since I skip around in pretty much every story I read. Anyways great job, update soon. I love it:)
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Reviewed By: Mochi~ On: August 30, 2005 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dear Arctic_Fox999, I love you with my whole peverted yaoi-loving, plot obsessed heart. Will you marry me? Honestly. This is.. so... damn.. good!! I stayed up til fuxxing six in the morning yesterdat just to read the whole story. And I was up for school at seven thirty! XD I don't know what to say, really, you're brilliant! And, if you don't update this, Mochi~ shall throw cookies of evil at you!! O: *shakes fist in air* ..and I will cry.
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Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17(2 lazy to login) On: August 28, 2005 11:23 CDT
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That twas awesome yet again.....I'm so jealous.......-glomps- More SasukexGaara!!!!! please!
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Reviewed By: whiteviper111 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-eyes are burning- OH. MY. GOD. -dies- EWWWWW!!! That was just... Just... Oh my god. I... I can't... -long moment of horrible awkwardly silence- Okay. EWEWWWWEEEEWWW!!!! Anyway, that was an awesome chapter!!! Neji, lmao, loves shutting Naruto up. -stares for a few minutes- I can't wait till you update!! THE PICTURES RAWK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 26, 2005 20:09 CDT
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You updated... Don't stop!
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Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 25, 2005 08:36 CDT
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG You finally updated!!! *hugs to death* I don't care if it's short, you finally updated!!! *huggles again* Anyways, glad that's over. I agree with Choi sama's second last review. I feel so dumb 'cuz I put you in my firefox favourites and I keep checking every hour or so, and I go over the whole list, and I saw you'd updated and I'm like, "Yay! OMG! She updated!" XD Forgive me for saying everything over and over again. Update soon 'cuz I'll be looking!
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Reviewed By: flay On: August 22, 2005 15:33 CDT
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buahaaaa! i loved the exchange between rock lee and gai! that was so funny!!!!
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Title: Progress... Yes!
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 17, 2005 00:09 CDT
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Awesome, some Itachi and Kankuro... You really need to keep up with the crazy dad thing. ANTICLIMATICAL PLOT FOR LYFE, MAN!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:46 CDT
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Oh, I found this either yesterday of the day before... I love it... i approve of the pairings, love you, and hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 13, 2005 10:59 CDT
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>.< You're killin me... I wait and wait for you to put the next chapter out!!! Please update soon! *huggles*
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Title: Well, all tens. I'm getting too soft...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 13, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I feel dumb. I've been on the computer for three days waiting for an update. I read about sixty other fanfics to kill time, but I kept checking this every couple of hours. So, update soon. (Tomorrow is good. ^^) I can't wait to see the Fan4 thing, and Kankuro/Itachi? Will do!
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