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| "From Here to Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: zelai02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 07:58 CDT
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Good thing that you updated even if you started that SasuNaru fic. Hope you'll continue it and hopefully finishes it. You really rock! Keep up the Good work!!! and post up SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird, the review below this one was supposed to be for a different story. But you know what? The ratings came out the exactly the same! Huh. Well, anyway, please delete that other one I wrote since it's not a review for this particular story. As for /your/ story, good job! I read the whole thing in like, five seconds. The enjoyment factor is really high up there, and your writing isn't bad cept sometimes it's hard to follow. So yeah, I'll quit the long ass sentences and say... UPDATE SOON! ^__^
| Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 09, 2005 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. However (that sounds so formal), I think it'd be better to leave flames around. If somebody thinks your story sucks, then, oh well. That's just what they think. I mean, yeah flames suck (especially when you try so hard!), but they're like buckets of cold water on your head that say-- THIS SUCKS. WRITE BETTER. And alot of times, that is really, really good and helpful. =)
| Reviewed By: Banana Gurl On: August 07, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nya. I like you. You're always hyper. Like me!!!^_^ Anyways, you're funny. I also think you've got Lee's chractr down perfectly. The football game for instance. LMAO. Anyways, please update!!! I luffs your story!!!
| Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 21:29 CDT
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Yeah, you rock, blah blah blah. Just re-read whitevipers review and you'll get mine... 'Cept for the Stacie part....Stacie's my best friend and she was all like "OMG I MET GAARA -preppy voice-" and I was all like "omg, I don't care!-mocking preppy voice-". But inside I was dying.... UPDATE SOON!
| Reviewed By: whiteviper111 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. -sounds preppy- THAT WAS ME IN THAT CHAPTER! I MET GAARA! AND KANKURO! -dies- OMGOMGOMGOMG! Oh, sorry. My name's Stacie. With the "ie" at the end. Wow. That just caught me by surprise. I almost fell out of my chair. Besides that, ROCK ON! KICK THOSE SORRY-FLAMERS ASSES!! If they don't like yaoi then why the hell are they reading your awesome story? grrrr... I LOVE YOU!!! -glomps- Oh, and, -gasp- Gaara? In normal clothes? Wow. I love the part where they were arguing and Kankuro accidently let that...small detail slip... KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!! I feel dizzy...
| Reviewed By: Zelai_20 On: August 06, 2005 08:44 CDT
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This is my first review ever! I really liked your fic the mixed feelings and all. I felt sorry for Itachi.I'm just dying to see your next chapter, literally. So pleeeeeease update already!^.^
| Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 12:35 CDT
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DUDE! Hurry up and update! The suspense is killing me!...Really, I have like, a month to live...
| Reviewed By: Ashy_Rose On: July 02, 2005 23:32 CDT
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Oh squee! This is like the first review I've ever made... and I really need to write someting good.. but yes! Whee SasukeGaara! So cute. You're really good, and I can't wait until you update again! *stays up for days waiting for an update.* ^.^;; Eh heh. Now.. off to write something of my own. Whee!
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 22:46 CDT
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^^ Like I said on ff.net: Does it REALLY deserve the rating? I don't think so. So far, it's actually more of a PG. ^^0 See, I'm not really allowed to read R-rated things *CURSE MY PARENTS!!!*, soo...^^0 Personally, there's bits of Pure Insanity that are worse, although you DO have a tendency to drop the F-bomb quite a bit. ^^ Anyway, update soon. About the little falling-on-Sasuke bit...Don't you just LOVE awkward situations? I plan to write LOTS of 'em into SC. Of course, when Nikki-chan starts falling for 'Kura, 'tis the season for sexual tension. ^^0 So, yeah. Uh...I'll stop now. Anyway, update soon, okay? I'm working on PI as we speak...Y'know what I like about mm.org? Your reviews appear immediately, and your updates appear immediately. And you can use the '^^' smiley. ^^ Uh...I'm sorry. I'm on a sugar-high, so...I'll just shut up now. ^^0 Update or feel my wrath! I'll...uh...I won't let you see Nikki-chan in leather anymore!! ^^
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:05 CDT
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^^ Cool. Update soon, okay? Poor Gaara....8.8
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:06 CDT
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...What the HELL was that last bit all about? ....^^0 Maybe I should learn something about Naruto...^^0 ......'Gaara' is a cool name....^^ Update soon, okay?
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 15:09 CDT
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^^ Cool!! FF.net isn't letting me review anything, but this is, like, really cool. Awesome, seriously. A couple grammar and spelling mistakes...Can I beta this? ^^0 Or not. Whatever. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 10:53 CDT
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^^ Lestat rocks. ...Why do I always like the evil people?! Seriously, ALL the guys I like are either evil, gay, dead, or some combination of the three. ...8.8 Anyway, this is cool. ^^ Update soon, okay? ...What the hell is Naruto, anyway? WHY DON'T I KNOW?!! ....I'll shut up now...Hey, I got a ficcy up on ff.net called Heart And Soul. R&R, please. Alot of people *okay, four* say it's good. ^^ Update.
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Reviewed By: twilight_aura On: June 05, 2005 02:51 CDT
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::squeal:: sasuke and gaara makin out teh tree!k-i-s-s-i-n-g!XDyayness!!one more chapter!!and i ish veeeery thankful that u spent yourtime on this^^i think i like ibiki(sry i spelled that wrong!)the ss teach..was expectin him to be the pe coach!XD::deep dark voise:: update soon... keep up the good work! .\_/.-b .
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