| "From Here to Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17(2 lazy to login) On: August 28, 2005 11:23 CDT
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That twas awesome yet again.....I'm so jealous.......-glomps- More SasukexGaara!!!!! please!
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Reviewed By: whiteviper111 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-eyes are burning- OH. MY. GOD. -dies- EWWWWW!!! That was just... Just... Oh my god. I... I can't... -long moment of horrible awkwardly silence- Okay. EWEWWWWEEEEWWW!!!! Anyway, that was an awesome chapter!!! Neji, lmao, loves shutting Naruto up. -stares for a few minutes- I can't wait till you update!! THE PICTURES RAWK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 26, 2005 20:09 CDT
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You updated... Don't stop!
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Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 25, 2005 08:36 CDT
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG You finally updated!!! *hugs to death* I don't care if it's short, you finally updated!!! *huggles again* Anyways, glad that's over. I agree with Choi sama's second last review. I feel so dumb 'cuz I put you in my firefox favourites and I keep checking every hour or so, and I go over the whole list, and I saw you'd updated and I'm like, "Yay! OMG! She updated!" XD Forgive me for saying everything over and over again. Update soon 'cuz I'll be looking!
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Reviewed By: flay On: August 22, 2005 15:33 CDT
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buahaaaa! i loved the exchange between rock lee and gai! that was so funny!!!!
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Title: Progress... Yes!
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 17, 2005 00:09 CDT
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Awesome, some Itachi and Kankuro... You really need to keep up with the crazy dad thing. ANTICLIMATICAL PLOT FOR LYFE, MAN!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:46 CDT
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Oh, I found this either yesterday of the day before... I love it... i approve of the pairings, love you, and hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 13, 2005 10:59 CDT
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>.< You're killin me... I wait and wait for you to put the next chapter out!!! Please update soon! *huggles*
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Title: Well, all tens. I'm getting too soft...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 13, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I feel dumb. I've been on the computer for three days waiting for an update. I read about sixty other fanfics to kill time, but I kept checking this every couple of hours. So, update soon. (Tomorrow is good. ^^) I can't wait to see the Fan4 thing, and Kankuro/Itachi? Will do!
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Reviewed By: zelai02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 07:58 CDT
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Good thing that you updated even if you started that SasuNaru fic. Hope you'll continue it and hopefully finishes it. You really rock! Keep up the Good work!!! and post up SOON!!!!!
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird, the review below this one was supposed to be for a different story. But you know what? The ratings came out the exactly the same! Huh. Well, anyway, please delete that other one I wrote since it's not a review for this particular story. As for /your/ story, good job! I read the whole thing in like, five seconds. The enjoyment factor is really high up there, and your writing isn't bad cept sometimes it's hard to follow. So yeah, I'll quit the long ass sentences and say... UPDATE SOON! ^__^
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Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 09, 2005 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. However (that sounds so formal), I think it'd be better to leave flames around. If somebody thinks your story sucks, then, oh well. That's just what they think. I mean, yeah flames suck (especially when you try so hard!), but they're like buckets of cold water on your head that say-- THIS SUCKS. WRITE BETTER. And alot of times, that is really, really good and helpful. =)
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Reviewed By: Banana Gurl On: August 07, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nya. I like you. You're always hyper. Like me!!!^_^ Anyways, you're funny. I also think you've got Lee's chractr down perfectly. The football game for instance. LMAO. Anyways, please update!!! I luffs your story!!!
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Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 21:29 CDT
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Yeah, you rock, blah blah blah. Just re-read whitevipers review and you'll get mine... 'Cept for the Stacie part....Stacie's my best friend and she was all like "OMG I MET GAARA -preppy voice-" and I was all like "omg, I don't care!-mocking preppy voice-". But inside I was dying.... UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: whiteviper111 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. -sounds preppy- THAT WAS ME IN THAT CHAPTER! I MET GAARA! AND KANKURO! -dies- OMGOMGOMGOMG! Oh, sorry. My name's Stacie. With the "ie" at the end. Wow. That just caught me by surprise. I almost fell out of my chair. Besides that, ROCK ON! KICK THOSE SORRY-FLAMERS ASSES!! If they don't like yaoi then why the hell are they reading your awesome story? grrrr... I LOVE YOU!!! -glomps- Oh, and, -gasp- Gaara? In normal clothes? Wow. I love the part where they were arguing and Kankuro accidently let that...small detail slip... KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!! I feel dizzy...
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