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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 12:47 CDT
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... You have to be kidding when you say it's over. NOOOOOOO! *Throws a tantrum* It can't be over! It's so, so, so good! I absolutely adore the way you write Duo, it's so human, so realistic...! Please, you have to write a sequel, or something! Just like '(^_^) SS', I go "SQUEE!" every time I get an update email thing for one of your various fics. I might have spotted one tiny little typo in chapter 2, but that might have just been my imagination... Just letting you know. ^^;; Anyway, please consider writing a sequel or something to Lock Up. ~Sandileina~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 12:29 CDT
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I quite liked it... it made almost too uch sense, if that's makes any sense?
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: July 20, 2005 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! How can you just end it like that? You've gotta write more...a sequel or something... Please?! Ya know...even if they did send someone to kill Heero and Duo I doubt they could manage it - those are two trained killers and even two other Gundam pilots would have a hard time dealing with them.
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 11:50 CDT
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It was goood but I'm so sad it's over! I want more!!!!! wahhhhhh! I really liked this story alot. Maybe you could make a sequil. I don't know. It ended good but like I said, I liked it and I want more. You are an awsome writer.
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Title: Hears *crickets* ???
Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: July 20, 2005 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I doubt it! You probably hear this all of the time, but you are one of the best writers in the fandom. I go "Squee!" when MM sends me a notification that you have added another chapter to something. I lurved this.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 13:40 CDT
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This is one freaky thing! Keep it coming, please! Meow... (insert paw-print here)
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:50 CDT
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I really like this so far. It keeps you on the edge of your seat. Especially with Duo popping out of nowhere all the time and trying to kill poor Heero! I feel so bad for Duo. It's kinda scary though because his logic is makin' a lot of sense! Let's hope he really is just being paranoid. Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 14, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome as always! Please keep going! This is really interesting and exciting.
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Reviewed By: LAChick! On: June 10, 2005 01:14 CDT
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wow wow wow wow. This is sooooooo good! Please up date soon! I really like what you are doing. It is extreamly unique.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 09, 2005 19:06 CDT
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Sadly, Duo's theory of what Une is up to completely matched mine. I think they are all in deep dip and I hope Duo can somehow rescue Heero at least. Where is WuFei? I noticed Heero didn't answer. I think Trowa is very in character, by the way. He, of all the pilots, respects the dangerous animal that is Duo. Putting Duo out of his (their) misery seems a logical option. After all, they shot Ol Yeller when he went mad. I hope Heero can make it all work. A little revenge on the ones who messed Duo up in the first place would be good, too.
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Reviewed By: priscel****** On: June 09, 2005 17:07 CDT
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Yea! Duo mention Wuffers and Heero was stumped as to what to reply... does he know something that he's not saying? Hwy hadn't he ever question what happened to those who said no? From what he had said before, he knew the possible outcome of saying no and yet he denied Duo's speculations even though they matched what he himself had said in the beginning (but without the pointing fingers)... WHat is Relena's role in this? does she have one? Does she know what Une is/has done to keep the peace? Binding the very people who brought it with double meaning words and fineprints written in invisible ink... I'm surprised she's not trying to be a politician. I hope Heero thinks about Duo's words, he's coming out of it and putting the peaces together quicker than Heero and he had the clues in plain site the whole while... or did he? Oh I hope that Une, if what duo's saying is true (I believe him), didn't throw wuffers in a pen-colony... i don't think he would have become as savage as Duo but probably just as deadly if not driven by hard worn pride and put an end to his own life if he didn't escape the colony? Duo and wuffers are prime targets for this because they were not as influentially connected... but Wu may have family ties to his clan on earth so prehaps they could hid him... maybe Sally would help. Ok i grasping at straws, more story please.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 10, 2005 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! That was intense! Keep going - I'm definitely interested. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: May 10, 2005 10:13 CDT
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Looks like yet another winner! Heero certainly had his hands full on this assignment. Let's hope he's successful and that the both of them learn what peace can really be.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o Une is a biotch! Just thought you should know. When Duo says 'they' does he mean humans? Is there a twist? Hmmmm......he's still crazy. Hope that Heero doesn't have to hurt him. Or vise versa. Duo's not going to eat that mouse is he. Yuck! *shrugs* Like I said, he's crazy.
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Reviewed By: priscel--- half asleep On: May 10, 2005 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm... could Une be so cruel to have Heero bring Duo back only to trap him into more controlled acts of violence? Could it be that Une is playing matchmaker dispite severity of the mission details she gave Heero? Of those listed as part of the Perventers, what happen to Wufei? Another story I gotta have more of!! Waiting patiently for an update!!!
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