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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OVER?! IT CANT BE OVER!! It was just getting really good. Crap-o, I really wanted to know what would happen next.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 12:48 CDT
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*Blinks* . . . It's over? *Flails* Nooooo!!!! It's such an awesome story!! Awww, I'm so sad to see it end, but it is a great way to end this. It made me go crazy that I never knew what Duo was gonna try next. Heero's has got an insanely large well of patience. *Snuggles 1x2 and sighs* They are just so cute together. Such a good story, I'd love to see a sequel or something. *Wanders off and cackles madly as she stomps on the crickets*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 04:51 CDT
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it was really good! the ending was unexpected but welldone and fits with the story. Although I'd hoped for more but stories end and new ones begin *smiles*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 24, 2005 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't find the words to say just how great this story is .So I just thought I would rate it a perfect 10..Please update.
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Reviewed By: Mono noke On: July 23, 2005 20:36 CDT
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Kinda abrupt there, I think. But I liked it none the less. A good ending, and I do wish that Heero had told Une the sunbathing bit. I think it would have been funny. Hehehe.
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Reviewed By: Futile Faith On: July 21, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was... abrupt but at least it alkl turned out good (methinks. Not to good with all the psychological...stuff) Great work as always. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShinYuy On: July 21, 2005 13:41 CDT
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*Dances up and down* I love this story!!! It's so beyond shiny. I like this chapter, we really see how screwed up Heero is, not just Duo. The blanket thing was so cute and should deserve a fan art or something. I can't draw though so i'll work on it. I love the fact that Heero called Une. That was just awesome!...Please keep writing this one!! -SY
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Reviewed By: Clau_ On: July 21, 2005 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo!! You can't leave it at that! You can't be possibly serious!?? Come on! Where's the lemon scene? The 'Duo goes back in normal society' part?? Argh!!!! >.
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Reviewed By: emerald eyes On: July 20, 2005 15:01 CDT
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so this is the end of the fic.....it was well done as usual! duo really seemed to want to believe in heero and i hope they do find that peace amongst one another and continue to share it together. i can't wait to read what you come up with next!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: July 20, 2005 14:39 CDT
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Wow, I wasn't expecting that at all. It was perfectly in character, however, and now that you've dropped the bombshell I can see where you laid the ground work. I love that about your stuff, your ability to surprise me. I hope they can get groceries delivered.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: July 20, 2005 13:02 CDT
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I was almost afraid that you'd forgotten this story, and here you've not only updated, but finished it. Excellent story, by the way. The end certainly leaves me wondering who was going to be right: Duo, with his paranoid belief that they were going to be killed, or Heero who was certain that they weren't. Considering Heero's earlier thoughts, his doubts, and Une's desperation to keep him and reform Duo, it makes me wonder. I suppose there's something in me that wants this story to continue, perhaps having the missing Wufei show up at some point in time and freeing his two former comrades. I can only hope you have more wonderful stories to share with us.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 12:47 CDT
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... You have to be kidding when you say it's over. NOOOOOOO! *Throws a tantrum* It can't be over! It's so, so, so good! I absolutely adore the way you write Duo, it's so human, so realistic...! Please, you have to write a sequel, or something! Just like '(^_^) SS', I go "SQUEE!" every time I get an update email thing for one of your various fics. I might have spotted one tiny little typo in chapter 2, but that might have just been my imagination... Just letting you know. ^^;; Anyway, please consider writing a sequel or something to Lock Up. ~Sandileina~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 12:29 CDT
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I quite liked it... it made almost too uch sense, if that's makes any sense?
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: July 20, 2005 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! How can you just end it like that? You've gotta write more...a sequel or something... Please?! Ya know...even if they did send someone to kill Heero and Duo I doubt they could manage it - those are two trained killers and even two other Gundam pilots would have a hard time dealing with them.
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 11:50 CDT
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It was goood but I'm so sad it's over! I want more!!!!! wahhhhhh! I really liked this story alot. Maybe you could make a sequil. I don't know. It ended good but like I said, I liked it and I want more. You are an awsome writer.
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