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| "Cold Hatred" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bold story, and I liked your notes. I too think that it is nor yaoi. Ranma is effectively female after tossing aside his male identity. Original vengeance - a bit too happy of an ending but I understand how Ranma, with the baby on the way, tired of vengeance.
| Reviewed By: imakfognik On: July 11, 2005 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say this is the highest rating i have ever given to a specific fanfic...gj..i love how u tied revenge and sex togethor so well...even a few bloodshed and beasty sex and yaoi can be used as well (panda-genma forced to do somthing with Soun)...of course that is my personal opinion on the matter. Anyways it is a good fic...keep on writing.
| Reviewed By: nea On: May 22, 2005 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Some people would probably say that Ranma is too OOC. But I think that you can push anyone too far and their personality can change for the better or the worse. I believe that some things in this story needed to happen, like impregnating kuno, blackmailing nabiki, and destroying akane's relationship with ryoga. With kuno, he deserved everything he got for the chaos he added to ranma's life and the total destruction of his old life. With nabiki, she needed to be used to prove that the accusations thrust upon him was false. Even with the proof he had he needed someone with the abilities to persuade others of the truth. With akane and ryoga, akane- revenge for the the treatment since their first meeting and abandonment after hearing false info about him. Even though he saved her plenty of times, when hearing something false about his family line she quickly abandons him. Ryoga- revenge for blaming him for all the bad things that happens in his life and for adding more chaos to his already chaotic life. Though ryoga did redeem himself at the end by marrying ranma and agreeing to care for their baby. I do hope ranma carries through with the marrage because he needs something good to come from the horrible life he had up until now. I hope you can see why I liked your story. You made me think and not too many stories do that anymore. The only thing you might want to change is where you double a couple of sentences during the nabiki part. Great job on the fic!
| Reviewed By: hentairoses On: May 14, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really surpise this fic hasn't got to many reviews. I've read plently of revenge fic that follow the same basic guide lines. Ranma get tried of how things are and go on a killings spree or some mystical gods of heavon or hell decode to help him out. But this is where your fic differs you actually gave a reason as for Ranma snapping back at those he felt bertayed by and the things that he had done. You could do a sequel to this, simply becuase eventaly those skelton in ranma cloest could eventuly fall out. Or somebody comes back for revenge aganist her, now that she has a family and a kid on the way. Other than that, the only drawback is when the fic repeats itself after Nabiki tells Ranma what been happening in Nermia.
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