| "Spring of Drowned Vampire Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 19:52 CST
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Not the best story around, but it has a great concept. Still, update here on mediaminer if you could, it would be much appreciated. Well, hopefully you've written more of this story. Anyway, update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 04:44 CDT
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now that is a very interesting look at what could have happened and its very real to the original, shampoo is a nut and shouldn't be aloud outside of her village. you've done good on this chapter, hope to see some more chapters. What do you think would happen if ranma got the pheonix pill, would his vampire side be affected by the sun or would the pain only be reduced to easily bearable? it would be interesting to see.
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Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good. The last chapter leaves the characters in ... quite a siruation ^___^ I rally would like to see their faces ^_^Especially Nabiki ^______________________^ So far the things are calm and not there is not that much action. I have a feeling you are planning much more mayhem later. Oh and there is also Ryoga's curse to explain...
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Reviewed By: datexan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Humm... things are looking rather interesting for Nabiki and Ranma... a little mental suggestion can go a ogn way. But which one got a tattoo? Or both? But I wonder how long Ranma and Nabiki can stay in Nerima with their fahters considering his curse? Will Eve or the others be able to help Ranma out and help him get rid of his other Fiancees? And after being gone for so long, I wonder what kind of mess Akane has made for their return? Will she tell Kuno that Ranma is a Vampire and has taken her sister captive? Or will another Vampire hear about what Akane has been doing and take care of the problem? All in all, things are looking pretty good, and interesting.
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Reviewed By: Innortal On: May 18, 2005 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad I could help. Let me know when the next chapter is coming out. I would love to help you with this story all that I can. Glad to see the last part you added there. It gave both hope and a little dispair. I look forward to the next chapter to see how it evolves, and to see if Nabiki meets the spuses. I would suggest at least one female spouse having willingly sunked herself in the cursed pool to stay with her beloved. Innortal
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